A suggestion, I think if the title is shortened to 'The Second Chance of Youth' it would sound more catchy.Until where I paused, the story hasn't given us any helpful clue but, I noticed the 'vampire' tag. Did it mean the MC was a vampire? That's why he looked youthful after almost a century?Writing and grammar-wise, the author could do better with more practice. If you didn't do it, I recommend to have up to 10 chapters in drafts before publishing 1 chapter. It will help to reconstruct and solidify your storyline and ideas
for those who want to know which chapter the mc finds out the truth about his girlfriend and meets her for the first time as his loverit started in chapter 240they meet in chapter 245
Finding this type of book is rare and always interesting love it so far plus there is no harem if you were reading the story you know what I meant by that
One of the best novels I've read on wn, and extremely addcting to the point where I always check it the moment I open wn. Everytime I see that it's updated, I literally go over the moon.Writing Quality - Though there are a few grammatical errors, the writing style and words are nothing short of exceptional. Every thing is described nicely and easy to understand. Plus, grammar doesn't matter much these days so you get 5 stars.Stability of Updates - Love that it's updating everyday, but sadly I read too fast to be satisfied. I respect your effort for keeping up everyday! 5 stars!Story Development - A bit cliched but also has originality. Incredibly enjoyable to read, plus I like the small twists every now and then. It also makes me want to know what happens next, getting me more addcted. 5 stars again!Character Design -
another great action novel from my favorite author. this novel is a notch higher than Double Moon. from the few chapters I've read, I'm already plugged into your world. if the double moon was a gem, this work is a superior gem: things are more explicit and exquisite. of course, let's not compare, both of them have their merits. please upload more chapters, I need to drown myself in them. Overall, nice work.
This is actually a good story , MC was trying to be a scholar when he got drafted in the older time to fight against sparta he lost and is reincarnated later on to the world however now systems appeared and with them mana , I like it quite a lot was really good just a bit weird about how MC was son of strongest mage and was born with negative stats even if he's underfed he still ate a good amount after he was free and the stats stayed quite bad . Apart from that it's pretty good
I just enjoy modern day wish fulfillment with a plot novels. Particular since the outcomes are plausible irl. Anything about business or money which involves a system etc i just love.
great idea ruined by the simple fact the mc keeps trying to be s mage and not a cultivator poorly executed ides...I love the whole mage being reborn into a cultivation world and being a cultivator but being a mage in a cultivation world is just plain dumb and stupid
I will start of by saying, you're doing great writing a story and it's not an easy job. You have succeeded in doing it. Congratulations !!The quality of wiritng is good and had good scope to become an even better writer in the future.The story development in each chapter is slow but very informative and very needed to get the insight of the story, hence I loved it !! Causing impatience means readers are eager to know more about this story.The character designing is coming up well, interestingly and sort of makes a reader keep reading further to know more, but getting to the point was a bit dragged that in between some paragraphs I found myself skimming through to know what it is. But worth it, the mysterious feeling which makes me wanna know more unable to stop, it already a success .Updating I have to say a but slow since it's only updated twice in a week, I wonder if people would see the novel and reme to read it if it lies unnoticed. Maybe that could be improved.The world background. Am applauding. It's perfect and simply marvellous. You have a wonderful insight about things you are wiritng and it gets to the reader well. With the descriptions I could see everything in my head as i read. Congratulations, you're a writer with a future. Keep going and try updating regularly. Fighting !
So far all the stories i have read by this author are completely captivating and only reason i did not give it 5 out of 5 in all categories is like most avid readers i was totally heart broken when this one got put on back burner for what ever reason pleaze don't have lost all inspiration for this story and finish it i an dyeing to find out what comes next.
Look forward to the next few chapters that will have more characters coming and even returning. JUICY HOT LOVE! WHO DO YOU HOPE LILY FALLS FOR OR WILL SHE HAVE MULTIPLE MATES....WHO KNOWS STAY TUNED PLEASE COMMENT AND LIKE❤❤
It's so awesome but I still want to know her Mother and Father are dealing with the loss of their son especially Dilli you know he's lost a lot of love ones in his life and I also want to see Rica's struggles with parenting knowing that if she doesn't go through therapy there's a high chance that she'll be a parent like her Mum which she probably might not want but well-done Zanny it's an awesome read so far