I really like it. It is reasonably paced and so far the tropes are there but it isn’t forced and feels like natural. Ch25
Raw .
Story is alright ,mc is like Wang Teng from that Attribute Picking Novel.
If there's a book am really waiting for its update,it this one ..?
i really liked the theme its just that i cant relate mark being romance candidate or am i like a father that dont want his daughter get married hahahahah but anyways the way i read is that i imagine my self being the mc and my dao heart is only for female if the fmc have male partner ill imagine myself bieng the ml but i cant relate to mark hhha maybe this heavenly test to my dao heart ill persevere i will read this just for the mother and daughter duo!!!!!!!!
This is definitely some novel that you guys should check out. A plus point for the sci-fi references, and a gripping MC to boot.
Writing - its actually pretty good and I like the immense vocabulary of the author for coming up with the best possible words to weave into his sentences and paragraphs. There were little to no grammar pet peeves, which gave me a really pleasant read. I should also mention the mad imagination of this author and his knack for naming things and characters. The Benedictus? I love how it sounds tbh
Characters - they feel raw and engaging, and its great to get a glimpse of their personalities as the story progresses. Its good to know that Alex isn't overbearing like I thought he would be - he's a naughty mofo incognito despite his killer rep, and it was a pleasantly begrudging twist when the truth about Kain was revealed. Overall, I like the depths of the characters.
Development - the pace is really great, and each chapter leaves you wanting for more content, so good job on that
Stability - keep it up
World - this is created an extremely complicated world that requires a lot more vivid imagery and descriptions. There were inconsistencies on this part, but they are hardly noticeable and can be easily corrected too since it was pointed out in some paragraph comments.
In conclusion, this is a book you should give a try ?
This novel its actually very good! The author put a lot of work in every detail the story is progressing very well and its very fun to read, although it as few chapters now with the release rating that it was soon it will chamge.All in all, read it its very fun, very well written and the plot is cleary was thought about!
why is the MC so stupid?chapter 46, meet random strangers, follow random strangers to a dangerous placeI'm guessing from the context that these 2 are work colleagues of his parents but I'm I the only one that thinks it's so nice of them to offer to give him some money at the age of 19 but did nothing for the last 11 years when the MC and his sister where orphaned at the age of 8 and 6 respectively WTF
I thought the novel would have some serious aspect in it despite the constant misunderstandings. But, man no everyone is stupid even the mc is f***ing stupid.
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Though it is not finished yet i find the story development to be in-depth, though xue Wei's talent for cultivation is absurd, and while he may be seen as uncaring he's actually very thoughtful of things but puts his and his friends needs first.
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