Top tier humor and writing quality you rarely see on this website. I am very entertained by this novel and will give other novels of this author a try as well.
The story had a rough start at first with the world building as too many different lifetimes were being fleshed out at the same time, but now as of 71 I feel the story has truly hit it's stride. Author was a little over the top with MC after leaving the academy on the mission with the Cheesy Cringe speech and actions. However now the interactions between characters are moving along with a normal feel and if they stay this way, the story will shape up to be really good. The one fear I have is MC gets stronger with Dual Cultivation, but I don't feel any desire in the MC to get stronger with the best way possible. I hope that changes and he is able to progress with the Harem in a smooth consistent way... I have seen a few Dual Cultivation novels where MC starts DC path to get stronger then for some reason or another finds ways not to do it or can't do it, or makes excuses why he didn't.. But so far the story is really enjoyable and is in a good spot right now.
its a harem so we cultured men would love to read this. sorry for my bad English, it's my 4th language
really good book so far definitely deserves way more attention and love them it gets. wouldn't be surprised if this novel eventually blows up.
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The chapters are really well written.I like this story a lot. The pace of the story is very well balanced nor it is slow neither it is fast. The story is based on mcu universe ( my guess could be wrong) from the hint provided in chapters and maybe the author extend it on its own imagination ( I don't mind if he/she did) .
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Good story i enjoy a lot
I dunno what i must write in this review
I mean 140 character was a lot u know
But this novel was good and i hope whoever read this will spent their little bit of their time to read this enjoyable novel
Gj big pp
Great work
The only bad thing is the beginning (The first 10 chapter) there many info dump but it’s improved after that
True it my not be the best novel out here, but it got its own vibe.
I really like your work, I've been voting it not until you post the last chap.
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