Shameless review from the author. Guys, I get a lot of complaints about my grammar issues. I have edited some of my errors. So. Please keep reading. And suggest your ideas about my novel. Best of luck everyone.
OMG! I didn't know this is on Webnovel as well. I discovered this novel on Dreame and got hooked right away, I comment on every chapter since chap 3(feeling sad and lonely cause I thought I'm the only one reading this) and then one day, my phone broke so I can't read the rest of the chapters I had purchased by coins anymore T-T. I thought I'm the only one who love this story so much. I'm so happy I'm not alone! THIS BOOK IS TRULY A HIDDEN GEM I HAD FOUND. I admire Shen Mu so much! He is a well-written strong character. I want to read more about his journey plus the romance, of course!!
this was indeed said and it sums my thoughts too about your book:
I don't agree with those who commented before me. Why is the novel confusing? Why is it a mess?
Maybe it is if you read a novel for preschoolers your whole life your brain cells die over time. I don't know, I just speculating. But it's a fact that if you don't use it you lose it. Maybe some ppl lost it.
Anyway, this novel is simple. It's a sci-fi-type novel of intergalactic beings. A world with a very high level of technology.
The protagonist was indeed sent back in time a week before the start of an intergalactic game that opens for menkind. This game seems to be the hope for the future of humanity and his beloved sister. He takes his knowledge from the future and makes the most out of it. What is interesting is that he does not have 100% of his memory and sometimes unforeseen things happen.
Now my review.
I like the story actually the author said it starts slow but to me, it's full of things that make me curious and it's not slow at all. for me slow is when a story is annoyingly boring, when nothing actually happens. The story is not a fighting everybody every second type of novel. which I like.
90% of the story so far happens inside the game. But I know there is a world outside the game the author has not really touched upon yet.
Now, this seems to also be a cultivation novel??? So I don't see where that is going to fit well in a sci-fi gaming environment that is my only concern about this novel because now everything is about stats and happens inside the game. So will it all turn onto the dao? Immortals? Flying on a sword and searching for the pinnacle of life? Going against the heavens? IDK? I have not gone too far yet for me to know that. I hope It does not become a Chinese face slapping showdown.
the mc is Lazy
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I like it! Good luck on your exams!!
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i just finished and this was the best book i ever read never stop writing my dude you have an Incredible gift if this ever comes out in printing i will buy it in a heart beat. Even tho i pirated the book i suggest anyone who reads this book to donate directly to the author thank you my dude while im broke hopefully you arent stay writing my dude peace
This is an amazing story , whether it is the story or the characters or just how dark it is sometimes is a pure bliss to read. I wish the author doesn't drop this novel and wish there were more novels like this. Lesssgooooo
I can't get enough of your words, and the writing style! Your way of writing thriller keeps the readers on the edge, and I love how well you have expressed the characters!
Keep up the great work!
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I have only read chapter 1 thoyour writing quality is quite good
Very interesting background of characters and a very, very interesting plotline. I really cannot wait to see where else this will go. Good job, author!