I'mma be honest first 3 or so chapters were really good and I was excited for the rest. The writing quality could be a little better but I'm just being a little bit picky. However I feel like everything when he got to the highschool was just not that good though. For example "the big breasted beauty" ok fine if you were just talking about her breasts... whatever; Not every other time you are talking about her though! It just comes across as lazy. Also, don't make a girl get a crush on him from walking in the room it's kinda awkward. I get that you may like anime but the mc speaks interchangeably different languages and you didn't translate ecchi to pervert or something similar? Sorry I don't want to be too harsh. I'll still read it as well. But the writing makes the girls seem very 2 dimensional and just not very interesting. I don't want to try to tell you what to do but at least in my opinion the story would be much more compelling and interesting if you made the girls less like the 2d cutouts in bad harem anime.Finally this is not super important but Is the MC black? I mean I assumed so since he was one of the first humans. Not to be racist or anything but almost no one in Japan is black so usually it would usually be noted in a Japanese girls internal thoughts. Is that why everyone comments on how black his hair and eyes are?I don't usually post criticism but I liked the story at the start so I wanted to give my 2 cents.
I think every thing about this story is alright.??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Do not let the overall rating which is low fool you this would have had 5* across the board but I have come to realise this book will never be finished... which has resulted in the low rating ?Part of me wishes I had not started this book... if it was continued under another title please let me know ?
After reading the first 20 chapters, I've gotten a good impression of the novel. Although it kinda reminds of another novel I read, I like the idea. Hope this one gets picked and gets updated!
Personally I like the storyline, but please also pay attention to the development of other characters who will help Kang-Ho, and whats no less important needs romance so that the nuance isn't too dark, even though the initial design is "hell" but occasionally there is a rainbow color is good too, right?, unfortunately it seems like it took a long chaps to know that, and I'm currently at chap 92, so far it hasn't been a disappointment to me, so good work ...
I had high hopes for this one but dropped at chapter 7. Weird MC, most things don't make sense and it all doesn't fit together.
Great story, contains a motive and sub motive all the time. Writing skills need improvement but I can see it better over time, keep up the good work.
The cultivation abilities dont have much background but are fairly simple to follow. The main character is a sneaky dude who will subdue his share of ladies with his strange technique and if you're here for a deep story... this aint it.
I have been into video games for a while and to be honest, I am absolutely amazed by seeing what the book has to offer. It may have a few weak points here and there but I think it would do amazing with better editing.best of luck author san
It has some fun moments, many moments to make you worry. Knows how to make characters feel in situations making them instantly more believable.
Its so captivating!! Originally I'm not a fan of horror but this is great! Its an enjoyable read?, with regular updates (till now ch.40) The owner gets a mobile horror game & the prizes & events turn real. Must say the story is very promising, the flow is very grasping, exciting & fun ,, I eagerly wait for the updates ?Readers prefering other genres( as I'm also aomeone who prefers romantic, revenge , competition, etc) Give it a try I highly recommend it!!????
a novel from the author of the throne of magical arcana. i love that novel and i looking forward to reading this beautiful handiwork of that author. cuttlefish that loves diving is a popular author in qidian. so ill give full 5 stars for now. it can change when i read more than 50 chapter. so dont disappoint me.i am not gonna be a scumbag that rate full 1 star to a novel that i haven't read.