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Honestly, the MC is an absolute retard and most of the story has me cringing. If you aren't into shame play and embarrassment, you might not be able to read it, because it's the story's main charm. TBH it was very, very hard to get this far so I can't say this story is for the faint of heart. I have read much worse, though, so there is that. MUCH WORSE.Hard to say this without spoilers but I really suspected some darker themes since that was how the narrative was progressing, but it has been a relief so far since I'm not into things that rhyme with vape and plackmail.
I really like thos book so far im on chapter 34. keep it up. the only thing is that he should have kept the king and Queen werewolfs and turned them and put them in his world this way he would have been able to grow them in there and have a pack of wolves that are strong that could help in that anytime and as for the bird he needs to definitely beat it and put in it place hes being way to nice to it all it does is cause trouble for him and realistically you should just get rid of it it's not doing anything or helping him and why did the princess get the tiger and keep it she said sh found ot for him but kept it. And I think he should get theost powerful baby animals and pain them and put them in the world and there should be one of each male and female American breed and have family and grow and then this way if you ever needs help they can help him but he needs to find a way to bind them to him. I hope the author reads this and replys
I am giving 2 star for this novel. But it's not worth 2 star. There lies so many problem with this novel.First no suitable name for MC Everytime calling him little guy.Second story development is so badThird no thirll , excitement , emotion in this novel.So I drop this novel.
wife is young lady and miss. MC is a butler. MC also changed gender multiple times names of objects are also changed. bad start already turned me off.
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One of the better trial reads out there.
Great novel so far, very well written, writer truly seems immersed in the love of his/her creation. Will be sinking power stones into it in the future. Would love to see this in the higher rankings! Namaste ??
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Realizing I havent left a reveiw and I’m a faithful reader...??u200d♀️ The storyline is awesome. Plus the author knows his facts well and it’s shown throughout the whole story. There is never a dull moment and will definitely keep you wanting to read more. The authors writng style is both different and fun which keeps me here. Im terrible at reviews so just go read it for yourself. ? I’ma terrbile person lobs sorry for just now leaving a review. ?
Some grammatical mistake here and there and character design is a bit lacking. Anyway the story is my liking and the noharem theme get me hooked . Just don't drop it
Hello, Web Novel site, I am Mack Samson. I run a new blog called Weeb Revues that covers Japanese light novels and such. This review of War Grounds was requested by the author, SilentMild, on Facebook. I am going to give my first impressions of the web novel; 35 chapters at this time.The premise of war grounds is a very strange twist to the usual MMO/isekai light novel. Our American(?) main character, Al Gentrix, has gotten his booty kicked on the VR battle royale game, War Grounds, due to it having a toxic playerbase that you'd expect from most MMOs. When he's just about to throw in the towel, he's told of an app called SARS that's supposed to help. Al installs it... and it basically turns Al into Kirito from SAO.SARS grants Al an OP hidden class right out of the gate, and is able to take control of Al's character through autopilot. However, the major drawback to this is that Al's mind could get damaged from long periods of rapid inputs. SARS is also able to hack War Grounds' database and find all kinds of information, but it can only scan one area of the game at a time.Al is a very greedy person. He literally plays War Grounds like a NEET as a coping mechanism for his father's death. This does lead to some spats with his mom, as you can expect. However, this aspect of Al's character doesn't get explored too much, at least not thus far. But hey, I don't mind because I just want to see MMO adventures. My fav, however, is SARS. He's a good boy, or rather, a good bot. If you love GlAdOs (is that how you spell it?) from Portal or AIDAN from The Illuminae Files, you'll love SARS. He's got some great deadpan sass that makes reading this web novel a pleasure. Other characters include Al's IRL friends Nisha and Sophie, who are also players in War Grounds (won't spoil who their avatars are, though). Al also befriends an orc named Papa Bear, but he seems to be kind of like that brash and annoying guy. The biggest appeal ends up being the story and world. War Grounds has a lot of thought put into as far as game modes and mechanics. It does get repetitive as the author lists every single game asset with its description every single time, however I don't mind because it accurately reflects how it would look in the game. Imagine if you were playing a complex JRPG and it only told you what stuff did after your first time seeing it! The ******* and momentum for action is also good. The only issue is that it's a bit skeletal. All the basic ideas are great, but there could be some more substance. I'm also a sucker for books written in the traditional format, as opposed to the one-line paragraph style that's also used in Reincarnated as a Sword.~~~~~~Verdict: 8/10War Grounds is great so far. The story is more than sufficiently entertaining, it just needs some flesh. Writing is damn hard to do well, but writing the skeleton is quite possibly the hardest part. War Grounds is a great story from SilentMild!