Moonflower414
After reading ? 500+ i can tell it is waste of time Translations quality is good but story sucks .If you are looking for game element , this novel is going to disappoint you .In my eye it was a total waste for me .... What kingdom building it seem it only teaches us about Chinese history .Recommend for people who want to known name of chinese general .
interesting story and world building. but I think the story assumes a lot of things at the start like the fact that there is mortal plane and cultivation plane.and he was a spoiled rich kid who suddenly has enough stamina to do blacksmithing, initial few missions should've been about exercising then story should've introduced how blacksmithing works like different stages and functions of different equipment in the workshop
hey just came here after reading read the Pokémon fanfic of the author...i have not started to read this story yet but i can say if its story details and amount of imagination that the author used in the Pokémon fanfic...then it is going to be amazing as well...thank u author and now i would start reading :)
Great that the story begins with a strong, emotional hook. There is also a nice contrast between the tragical and the lighthearted, sometimes underlined by dialogue that is suitable for real characters that are a bit lost in the melancholy of the life they lead. It is really good that this started out the way it did. Now I apparently have to wait to read more, a shame, since I just got into the story and the concept is intriguing enough that this ➡️ my library
La historia esta bien. La historia esta bien. La historia esta bien. La historia esta bien. La historia esta bien. La historia esta bien. La historia esta bien. La historia esta bien. La historia esta bien. La historia esta bien.
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
Concept is cool but everything else is pretty bad.The MC doesn't even try to hide it, it's pretty bland, MC is prideful and 2D, it's brain-dead is the best description.If you want something generic, boring and overly sensitive but also prideful MC turn off your brain and read this.
I'm sorry, Mister Meng Fan, but I'm afraid your job application doesn't even remotely resemble the proper format. At a bare minimum, we would need it to include your highest level of schooling, references from previous employers, and absolutely no mention of your 'sick-ass skateboarding tricks'.Oh, and next time you apply to Baskin Robbins? Don't title your resume My Extraordinary Achievements.
Blew me away within the first few chapters, only continued to get better from there. The MC really represents himself well and solidly throughout the story, great work.
Just excellent story! .........
Yeah I think we have so bad timing here
great book so far
