Sageash
Love, love, love this book!
update pls...
"Senior, the phrase 'knowing your place' suits someone like you much better. You've spoken less than ten words to the person you've had a crush on for years, yet you still think you're successful and superior." I NEED A MOMENT. Su Yin just dismantled an entire person in one sentence and I am SHOOK. This is not the fragile little rabbit the system described. This is a woman who has survived abuse, poverty, and public humiliation and decided that she is DONE being polite about it. What makes Su Yin's dialogue so satisfying is that she never raises her voice. She's calm, almost conversational, which makes every insult hit harder. When she says "So what do you think I should do? Report you to the police for leaking privacy and slandering others? Senior Yu?"—she's not panicking. She's listing consequences like she's reading a grocery list. And then the follow-up about Yu Youqin not even being able to speak to her crush? That's not just a comeback, that's psychological warfare delivered with a smile. The narrative voice also deserves praise. It's witty without being pretentious, and it has this dry humor that matches Su Yin's personality perfectly. Lines like "What a troublemaker! If it weren't for the mission, who would want to stick to Lu Xingcun's cold face all day?" give us direct access to Su Yin's internal exasperation while keeping the tone light. And the side characters have distinct voices too. Yi Shang's dialogue is all exclamation points and enthusiasm—"Me, me, me! Can I come too?" versus Lu Xingcun's minimal, almost deadpan responses. The king's dialogue is warm but carries weight, and Queen Zhou Xianghui's bluntness is instantly recognizable. Everyone sounds like themselves.
Oh my heart. “I came back to chose you.”
nice story
superb......want u to upload fast....
can't wait to read the next chapters
Give me more!
very nice stories
loving this story
I really like reading this book. I wanted Joshua and Luna to have their happily everafer. But Joshua is foolish and has hurt Luna too much. still have mire then 1600 chapters to read. I usually stop books that go in circles
Seems like a good story. Just wish I could read it for free, as I like.
