Rather cliche system story, but that doesn't mean it's bad. What I dont like is how bad the grammar is and there is no improvement in fact i feel like it got worse, and since there is nothing new and interesting about this novel I'd rather not have to struggle to decipher what the author meant.
More more more chapter more more more chapters more more more chapter more more chapter please and nice job ? on the chapters ????????
Its fun, very entertaining and has a bit of slice of life genre. Its a good novel for passing out time relaxing and that though its kinda boring in some parts that i cant explain it lacks something that i cant express in words.
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Excellent and unique book. Really worth everyone's time. A prehistoric survival adventure full of twist and turns. ???????????????
i have read up to the latest translated chapter in here..the novel is good so far. but i hope the translator picks it up again..i tried reading the MTL and its a mess.
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Im not sure what to say about this novel honestly, i feel this poor translaters talent is wasted on this novelhonestly i quite liked the first 50ish chapters where it was more of a slap stick comedy with a retardedly op mc, with plot armor so thicc that he could honestly survive a direct nuclear blastHowever, after reading a bit further, that is really not the case, the mc feels so incredibly weak, levels, stats and gear have no meaning this chapter i dropped it, he has a pet with a base 750 ms, which is so fast that the pet can catch arrows mid air. this stupid mother****er gets some **** stolen from him (game mechanics lol) and he doesnt use the fastest boi alive, excuse me what the ****it was an alright time sink comedy, but jesus christ he ruined that too
If you like The Legendary Mechanic, you probably will enjoy this one. Pity though after chapter 40, it's mtl. Just like TLM, imo this kind of novel is boring when the story is focusing too much with the npc protagonist solo adventure, when actually the best part about this kind of novel is the players.
i mean its readable so the translator is doing a decent job, but the only word to summerise this novel would be "Why?" dont get me wrong there are good novels that are about playing games there is even one about playing a computer game on a screen but atleast they are about some sorta super advanced new game and not ****tyass pubg...
Well past the 1st 10 chps it's pretty generic ig , don't mind , I read something similar a while ago , I mean these tropes and ginks r bound to be repeated after all , still pretty fun read
Read to chapter 32 and just couldn't do it anymore. The mc is getting nowhere. I understand there are troubles in his life but it feels like he doesn't have enough based off how you make the mc out to be. He is just too casual and laid back but has big dreams with too many set backs. By chapter 32 he should be somewhere especially with his fateful encounter. I feel you just made it too hard and too ridiculous for a beginning story.