There's another novel that the author wrote that had a similar ending (swallowed star) so I'd like to believe it's the same for all the others
MC can't die,in fact he got rewarded if he dies. So there's literally no stake. The story got boring super fast.
when will chapter 248 come out
What, how can I only find this masterpiece now?! Someone could've recommended this to me, but no one did?? Anyway I don't wanna spoil you anything ? It is very refreshing to read, and the plot t--- oops, okay I told you I'm not gonna spoil you. Go read! 5/5 ?
Hello, the author is here!I am waiting for comments and criticisms from all of you on my first writing experience.Have a pleasant reading.
Honestly I'm not good with reviews so I'm just going to say this the fights are good I like where the story seems to be going I love the humor . . . . .and I think I might just be in love
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Pointless story. You come for the monster mc and he is already human by chapter 5 xD it's a joke aha ...............................................
I take off my hat and proceed to applaud for the great novel you have written. It's one of the best horror & thriller stories I've ever read. I will be more than happy to read more chapters of this masterpiece. Congratulations, Author. Keep it up :D
Almost three hundred chapters have been published at the time of writing this review.
Spoiler alert:
I will like to give a breakdown of our journey so far.
From 1 - 150+ was volume one.
These chapters contained scenes of the MC's growth, both in abilities as well as character. You may like or dislike his character sometimes when reading because character development is was kind of constant. So based on the situation he may change a little.
Things might not have been executed in the best way possible in terms of breaking down explanations that were written in later chapters.
This was done to prevent info dumps and fillers.
Everything unexplained was later explained in the future chapters without a single detail omitted.
The next volume which is currently ongoing has several mini-arcs.
The first mini-arc was just concluded. It comprised of the MBO entrance test as well as a few scenes giving explanations to things that happened during the six weeks time skip.
Also, a few scenes showing us happenings outside of the MBO test arc were included.
The test arc went on for longer than I intended. Some readers that might feel the need to skip scenes to find explanations on the kitchen accident as well as what happened during the six weeks time jump, can head to chapter 294.
I've written side stories where everything that was skipped in the past chapters was tabled out in scenes.
After the side chapters, we will continue with the current storyline which leads on to Gustav's life within the MBO camp.
For new and old readers, Chapters 1 - 161 are being edited to give you all a better reading experience.
Thank you all for the support so far. Peace out ✌️
-TimVic
hmmm very interesting concept, I like where this is going. All I can say is keep it up. I'd really like to see more of this because this is pretty cool. Really looking forward to more. Your descriptiveness is also really captivating, and your grammar is pretty good. I'll rate this a 5.0
The Characters are displayed Fullly... interesting character in fact.. great storyline but the world plot is not displayed Fullly .... I don't know about future but starting is great ... worthy read..