Manafey
I had to drop at chapter 32, the translation is probably the worst I have ever seen on this site.
Currently 226 translated web novel chapters.
Update it then, c'mon it's in the top 1000 even
I don't know what everyone is always complaining about. This novel is one of the most well written stories out there it will not meet all your expectations but it will remain in the realm of realism for why important characters make some of their disappointing decisions. The novel is inherently dark, I don't know to what degree but if you came here after reading happy go lucky novels expecting this to be the same then you're wrong. The fights are just wonderful and power scaling also good. There are no unreasonable power up or the MC doing so OP sh*t out of nowhere. I actually enjoy the relationships in the story. Now the MC is good he has his own flaws and is not one of those stupid main character that can do anything, he has his limitations, his own interests, he strengths and weakness. So no matter how much you want it the MC can't solve every problem the way you want it. If we are talking about anything I hate in the novel is the generic face slapping of young masters.
Great novel! Very well written. One of the better ones ive read on this site. The only bad thing is a bit of excessive and unwarranted simping from the MC towards the FMC during certain parts of the book. It was a bit frustrating to read. But i really recommend this book.
****
Rating: 3 Stars & Dropped at Chapter 210
In summary, this novel was a massive letdown. Initially, the captivating title, intense action scenes, gripping backstory, and likable protagonist set high expectations. However, the plot failed to meet these expectations, unfortunately, due to predictable reasons.
Contrary to what the title suggests, this isn't a tale of revenge, an epic saga, or a groundbreaking story of a woman disguised as a man in a patriarchal society. At its core, it's essentially an average, albeit well-crafted, romance novel, which is why I felt deceived. It wasn't until halfway through that I realized this shift in focus.
The narrative shifts to a blend of past and present, forming a web of missed opportunities and fated encounters between the main characters. The supporting elements, initially intriguing, became mere background for their developing love story. While I understand it's a romance, I couldn't help feeling that the story could have been much more than a superficial coping mechanism.
What I would have truly enjoyed reading was the MC's origin story – the part before her death, the one that hinted at her rise through the ranks, the friendships, political maneuverings, and battles that shaped her character. That would have been a compelling narrative of resilience, adversity, and triumph, akin to Spartacus or Mulan, but without the reliance on a male savior. Instead, we got a protagonist passively waiting for love, which fell short of my expectations.
The lack of ambition in the story left me disappointed. Perhaps, if approached knowing it's primarily a romance, others might have a different opinion. However, as someone who generally dislikes romance novels, I expected more depth, character development, engaging side characters, or intense plot twists. The first part was entertaining, but the latter half lacked substance in these areas.
Additionally, the author's倾向 to have the MC suddenly acquire advanced martial skills seemed unrealistic and detracted from the storytelling. The line between an overpowered character and lazy writing blurred, especially when it wasn't intended for comedic effect.
Ultimately, despite the decent writing, the romance aspect didn't resonate with me. While the book may appeal to fans of love stories, it didn't fulfill my personal preferences. I tried to continue, but there was little left to engage me. So, while it's a decent novel, it's not the one for me.
This novel started off with such promise, the first 50 chapters were extraordinary. However, the next 30 chapters felt monotonous and unengaging. The author seems to be limiting themselves, akin to a comedian who fails to evolve and keeps recycling the same tired joke. The author's brand of humor turns the main character (MC) into a punching bag, subjecting him to both physical and emotional turmoil for cheap laughs. They rely heavily on this repetitive theme to drive the story, even at the expense of character growth and depth.
Despite these flaws, the novel has its redeeming qualities when you overlook the one-trick pony aspect. The setting is unique and captivating, the supporting characters are well-developed, and the plot and concepts are strong. Unfortunately, the author squanders the potential of the story with a decline in writing quality that leaves me, as a reader, feeling let down. If you decide to give it a try, perhaps set your expectations low or tune out the constant reliance on the same joke.
Thank you for telling me
i think the author dropped this
oh i have read that one too, the first novel i read it was very good
This junior doesn't dare!
Loving the story so far. MC is funny. The system is funny as well. Male lead is intriguing. Can't wait for more.
I really like your work i hope you dont drop this i am really looking forward to your work I hope that you dont drop this and can you release more chapters i am really looking forward to it
