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Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
So far the story is great, writing is organized and I’m loving the world building of the story!
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Only griefs I have with this novel are very small. Every once in a while there's a grammar mistake (most likely due to the author typing too quickly and not catching them when proofreading. They're forgivable and not like the ones you find in cultivation novel #497) Worth a read, not the deepest but it occasionally explores more complex topics.
A fine novel. Some of the characters are so miserable and difficult to tolerate, especially his sisters and his enemies, even the MC sometimes. But the story's worldbuilding and overall idea and plot is really interesting and engaging that I have no choice but to spend my money and read. The author clearly is very creative with the way he bring up cool concepts including some powers and items and the politics thing going on. The smut scenes are really perv3rted too. Wish the harem will progress a bit faster though and that Aeric takes his m0m soon, lol.
It seems a bit slow at first, but I think that the plot is solid along with the character design and I hope to see more improvement in Arc 2
The writing quality isn’t bad but it becomes confusing pretty often due to constant pov switches almost every chapter it felt like. The premise of the book is good but the world I feel should have been more flushed out (granted I stopped reading for a bit and may have forgotten stuff) character progression and the progression with his beasts i feel are good.
not bad fanfiction, I would even say good, but as for me, the author needs to devote more time to mc, and although the story is just beginning, our mc has become a force, but compared to creatures in space, he is a weakling and cannon fodder, albeit at a high level. Dear author, please tell us more about magic, etc. Even now it can be compared to the whole universe, but I think magic can surprise and at least give him more opportunities, as well as the fact that he travels through different worlds and universes , as for me, it is necessary to take away interesting forces besides souls , and although I understand which is already very difficult to write at the moment, because our mc is almost omnipotent, but please let him start using the laws more often. Also, please ask the author to come up with a normal name Mc, otherwise void is not very cool for me, but not very much, as a person who reads this with a translation from English to Russian, I say it's a real trifle to come up with a name for a demon. It's also worth giving go more interesting slaves, and as for me, a little more cruelty to him, otherwise sometimes he does shit that makes me want to cry tears of blood. I understand that the author wants to diversify the plot and not make the mc completely cold and aloof From everything , but the mc should not be made stupid. He could have avoided some problems if he had shown great cruelty , but there's nothing to be done about it , so to speak, it 's the author's will , as well as about the gods and I would like you to explain the difference in their powers, Their + and their - as far as I understand, there is an energy of faith and I would see if mc could create faith in himself and become a god? Anyway, I've given the author a couple of ideas here, so let him decide for himself. In general, come out with chapters more often and I'll definitely finish reading the whole top! The author also holds on to good inspiration.