Lovely story... the mystery in the story is pretty interesting actually and the writing skills is pretty smooth and explain everything in details in a simple form the background story and the characters caught my attention full of actions , great job author keep it up
waiting when trial read will stop westernizing MC names to english in a chinese society setting.meanwhile I'll do my due diligence of giving 1 star for these types of translation
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This novel is wonderful, I just wish the author would do a mass release or something
The update rate is quite stable but I need more chapters!
I don't know much about this story. I didn't manage to get far in it. The fact is that today i simply wasn't in the mood to hear so much about another competition.Why? Why did all those other novels abused such a simple plot line for me/us, reader/s?
I really liked this one, at first the MC was kinda generic to me but soon I got hooked when they brought the girl he calls "Tool Man #1" into play.This idea of a untalent MC seeking help from a more talanted person with his system is quite novel to me, usually the MC hoards the benefits all to himself, here it's different though.Later when more girls are brought in things get even more interesting, following multiple POVs is really interesting, the many adventures they each go through is way more fun to read than many novels coming out these days.The best to me is the fact that none of them is invencible, none of them is gonna solo their respetive "runs" and that's really refreshing in a system novel. Each girl does fail and dies many times, but they improve on the next run and go further beyond. The whole thing feels kinda like a "rogue-like" type of game, death in these simulations is expected, the trick is to use what you learned in the previous run to go further in this one, eventually passing through certain events with a "perfect run".All in all, really liked the novel. Having read the RAWs I can say the novel doesn't disapoint as it progress, I recomend this one to all that have some time to spend.
Good novel! I like the way the story unfolds. Some chapters at the beginning I think they need a bit of editing, but in general it is a novel that I am enjoying. ??????????????????????
This is pretty good so far, then MC’s power isn’t too OP, he can see other peoples stats like most other MC’s but I guess he sees a little more. Also he can see if someone else is about to have a huge chance, if it’s either good or bad. Hopefully we can see more chapters uploaded because we barely know about the MC or his progress so far other than his upgraded ability.
Good novel with OP MC and Likeable harem?
I like this book because it combines a bit of that "DnD" vibe within a modern, "real-life" setting. I also liked how it got straight to action rather than a long, drawn out prologue.
Just showoff your cultivation and then announce a coming threat. some people would certainly believe you and be willing to learn. Seems conviluted to just open a store and hope things work out
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