What the fuck story is this? It's trash! If only I can report stories then I have already reported this novel long ago. From the looks of it, they both have a son but it looks like they didn't care about him. They just keep passing the child with one another. Wtf? I hate this story this is the worst story I have ever read.
Needs serious editing
good novel but too much complexity by adding unnecessary Explanations where not needed and no explanation where needed.
you HONESTLY have a wonderful book right here? why aren't you updating it? I don't get it?? your're writing is fluent and fluid enough to pull your readers into it, and even the prologue was caused a spark of expectations. the events and chapters so far are well paced with their own mysteries, and I have every reason to believe you could make a truly successful novel from this.
a word of advice from a fellow webnovel author; on Webnovel effort pays. consistency is key! if you truly maintained a consistent update you would be featured and your novel would gain more exposure, even a contract offer isn't far off the way i see it. all it need so far is a good book cover, the synopsis and prologue are good to go in my opinion. a nice cover, and your're set.
Menerjemahkan teks dengan kamera
yes, the story is not bad, not too good and not too bad
just here for the free fast pass for this event
this is a great story , I'm really enjoying reading it , I hope the author continues updating the chapters everyday .
what chapter is he gonna become a lich soon?.
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Love the exodus series keep up the good work
Mc being god in his zone destroys all the fun in it. I can imagine better things to to than him and it feels boring
Fairly cliche, but less than you'd expect from a Chinese translation. The pacing seems great, the Mc is OP but without feeling like he is having everything to easily. So a weird OP but at the same time weak enough where you feel like if he's complacent he'll be killed. The character development isn't great, but that's expected from a Chinese novel. But at the very least the MC is level-headed and a reasonable person, at least more so than the majority of Chinese protags.The world and game system is decent enough, the modern scenes are slightly jarring but they serve some purpose of building the world-however, slim and meaningless that may be. His abilities and the system are interesting though, I get serious project zomboid vibes from the game, and it seems like a real challenge to play let alone survive, obviously tho the MC has his cheat which makes it easier. But if anyone has played project zomboid that only makes it so that progression is occurring at a tolerable pace. If the MC didn't have a cheat it would probably take him months to level skills. Anyway it has the stamp of approval from me.
I definitely felt big PP energy in this story~Readers, if you love big PP, gaining exp for your PP and levelling up your PP, this story is definitely for you!