good novel i wish that will be chosen .................................................................................................................
Good start, good premise. The only problem is that your usage of the past tense is wrong, and i think you have this misconception that whenever something is in 3rd person perspective, everything will be written in past tense. That is not entirely correct. Anyway, i love the character development and the world building. Perhaps, spice up the story with some unexpected events.Good luck!
Whole Novel seems to Copy Paste...Also why the hell People Spamming 5 ? when there are Zero Chapter updated?is this Novel worth your time?ANS: NoSave your Time and Brain Cell
Best book ive read on this app, currently donating every power stone i get into this book! Authors writing skills and also updates are just second to none, cant wait to see where the story goes!! ??
interesting storyline makes this book fun to follow. this book is very good and very easy to understand, interesting storyline makes this book fun to follow, can't wait to continue reading this book
Cliche overpowered MC. Cliche plot buildup. Not interesting enough. Writing feels contrived. Romance falls flat. Sigh. Got through the first fifty chapters give or take and didn't really feel anything at all other than disappointment.
Absolutely atrocius quality, I read Machine translation regularly. I will not read this. Story idea is nice but the actual development isn't interesting.
So far, this is looking pretty good - I mean, for a Webnovel trial read, anyway. It's straightforward, doesn't rely on reactions and padding, delivers what it promises, and has a character that isn't just another generic Xianxia protag.Hoping it gets picked.
Was looking forward to the System vs MC dynamic but that basically disappears by chapter 100. It only shows up randomly to annoy the MC. Progress basically turns into generic cultivation but is lock stepped by the system. Power progressions feels completely forced and only serves to let MC fight stronger enemies. This is especially true when his friends also start progressing like xianxia MCs. Humor is mostly low brow and 90% of the jokes don't work, and serves to make the MC look retarded. The author also makes the MC retarded for that matter. I guess it feeds back into the low brow humor and gives it a reason to exist.Story isn't cohesive. Feels like most chapters are just filler of go here, get item/inheritance, but item/inheritance doesn't really matter because system will randomly give a new overpowered skill. Character and world development is underwhelming. I can't even form an idea of what clothes the characters are wearing beyond generic ancient Chinese clothing. Tl:dr Original premise is basically given up for filler chapters of meaningless events of low brow humor. Arbitrary power progression introduces new enemies and events to recycle filler. Character development, world building, etc takes a backseat to the above.
This novel has no ending, don't read if you don't want to be disappointed.
Hey webnovel when are you translating the new novel from the author of the legendary mechanic. Hey webnovel when are you translating the new novel from the author of the legendary mechanic.
I am really looking forward to this novel!I don't know why it wasn't the editor's choice because I think it's better than I am a prodigy...It is fast pacedProbably no haremMc is not dumbHope to see it being translated soon