Nice start, discription is good, clearing everything in the start, power levels also very clear and simple, easy to read without confusion. Looking forward to seeing next chapters.....
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The theme was completely immensed into reality,like so much???????????????????????????????????, ??????????????????????
Is this a joke? Where's the ambition, the urgency - emotions even! The protagonist isn't a human. He doesn't know how to think for himself, let alone what critical thinking is. You can put a human-shaped cardboard in place of the protagonist and still have story progress in the exact same way as this has been going. Nothing the protagonist does matters, even his cultivation depends on the author's mood. He will sometimes stagnate for years on end, and other times rapidly increase in cultivation with no rhyme or reason.
Overall, pretty terrible. If you like the idea of this novel, read “Scholar’s Advanced Technological System” instead. This novel unfortunately takes the idea of teaching and academics, and completely throws it out the window in order to focus more on “faceslapping” and chapters filled with praises about how intelligent the MC is. By like half way through at chapter 20, there was only like 2 or 3 instances where any information on what he was teaching was given. Every other instance was “after a few hours of teaching physics to X character …..” The characters are 1 dimensional, and the MC has the social intelligence of a xianxia young master who was thrown down a flight of stairs. Any other character is sorted into 2 groups based on if they like the MC or not. If they like the MC they have 0 personality, 30 IQ, and follow the MC around saying how awesome he is. If they don’t like the MC they have 0 personality, 20 IQ, and act arrogant so the MC can faceslap them into the dirt. Even this is done poorly however. Sadly, this is a typical D tier xianxia novel disguised as a novel about academics. Suggestion: avoid reading if you value your time.
This novel is terrible. For some reason I can't post my actual review here so I'll copy paste it below as a reply. Just know that the novel is terrible.
Not a bad rating just came here to say that couldn’t get past chapter one because the cringe and second hand embarrassment.
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Fairly mediocre read. Nothing that's offensively bad, though also nothing special, creative or particularly good. The writing quality is "so-so". For starters, there is plenty of simple spelling mistakes. I personally don't really mind, though still somewhat annoying.What's more annoying, is the occasional grammatical error. Also nothing too bad or too frequent. It's still there though.The thing that annoys me most about the writing quality, is the really simply and at times clumsily written sentences. A lot of simple word usage and simple sentences and the prose at times doesn't really flow too well.Update stability is fine.Story is fairly generic though interesting enough to keep most people reading.Characters in this novel are one of it's other downfalls. They are all fairly two-dimensional. There just isn't much too them. What you see is what you get.There is also plenty of weird logic leaps all over the place, which make the characters feels more like NPCs, than like actual characters.Big 'meh' for me. If this was done well, this novel would have been so much better.The world is okay. Some thing are pretty interesting, while others are straight ripped out of any generic anime.The world is also pretty childishly put together. The reasoning and motivations for the way things are the way they are, only make sense if you don't really think about them.Could overall be a decent read if you haven't read many novels like this and aren't bothered too much by the occasional writing issues and the childish portrayal of the world and characters. If you're looking for real quality and/or creative, look elsewhere.
I really don't understand the Novel's 1st place.The novel isn't bad as is, there is a lot of potential in the world building. The characters, while not quite there yet, aren't really bad. The main characters that is. Most side characters pretty much don't have any depth at all.I don't particularly like the way the school life is described. It's a military school. Even if they want students to experience a rough life, students "disappearing" each year? Yeah, who would care about that...There's also other things I consider plotholes that annoy the heck out of me. First describing portals as a precious technology that is only in the hands of three kinds of people, but nevermind the fact that the "dangerous" red portal is accessible at a school, how come there are no guards/you can simply enter?All in all, a good approach but the plot really seems too unlogical to me at times.
well, you may not consider this a review at all, just a compensation for the low review they gave, Doesn't deserve perfect rate but decent point will suffice. Sloppy start but becoming interesting as the time passed. I just want to witness the hypocrite man's doom (the one who put green hat to mc), I dunno why, kinda irritates me whenever I see this so-called-good-man with his b$tchfriend. Well I'll be your reader 'till then, don't fasten the events, your present pace is good, We/I will wait, nice.
Gosh, this is my first time reading a novel with an interesting background but the writing is broken.There is no distance at all, I feel you should recruit an editor to make a better novel.