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Hm.... Well....... Its not original? And also the **** with you, your just copying the overlord anime the hell with you so disappointing its just a fake booooooooo I hope this dissappears here **** you never ever copy overlord anime if it's fan fiction it's OK but the **** with you you just copied the thing
This story is quality entertainment. Love the brand of action the author brings to the table. Cool and stylized, just the way I like it. The story is well-written and moves at a blistering pace. I slammed through the first five chapters and can't wait to dive into some more. Added this to my library. Great characters and I love the fictional world inside the game. Full marks for entertainment value alone, but the core technical aspects of a well-written novel are all here too. Highly recommended reading.
This novel is unoriginal. There's no debating that. But the fact it's unoriginal isn't the problem. What is the problem is that it's not only the same concept, but it's exactly the same events as well. It's like the authors are following a guide. A guide which explictly states all the events, choices of the protagonist, and dialogue which must occur in the novel.Generic is a word that's thrown around a lot. But this...this is truly generic.
This one is actually decent. Best in the batch at least. ................................................................................
I question existence. Webnovel really got that naming sense tho. Genius, really. Random Useless Life Application Point:-----------------------------------------------When you feel like you can't come up with any original names for your novel, remember this quote, "Your unique, just like everyone else.". Then, the inspiration will come.........................................................
i hope u can edit the first few chaps... good job i hope u can edit the first few chaps... good jobi hope u can edit the first few chaps... good jobi hope u can edit the first few chaps... good jobi hope u can edit the first few chaps... good job
I just want to say that your intro and starting of the novel was great and all until you reach chapter 44..the mc meets a girl and becomes flipping retarded by giving in to a girl just because she is pretty...the mc was just about to get op but noooooo! The freaking author just had to ruin it by doing this crappy character development. Manipulative, and controlling females? Not my cup of tea. Sorry but im dropping this novel. Was great while it lasted.
no translator? hmmmm suspiciousno editor? hmmmmm very suspiciousenglish names? hmmmmm very suspicious indeedI dont know why but I feel like this is an english written novel, but then again, that username sense is propably chinese........ah what the heck, I'm reading*adds to library*
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Dont even bother.I read almost up to latest chapters around 500ish due to webnovel free novel deal, I gave it a shot.At first MC is supposed to be a “dragon” yet sneaks around for no reason but because he is being overly cautious. I have no issues with that but then he has some fetish of using his women as bait for a particular scheme and let them get molested. Thats where I draw the bottom line.You can hide, scheme and act. But there has to be a bottom line. Clearly the author is more interested in creating plot twists and schemes within schemes than making things make sense. Even a great schemer like Lelouch would never use his sister Nunally in his schemes. This work is a failed attempt at writing a scheming type of character yet having a strange dragon pride bloodline that doesnt matchThroughout the story, author loves showing how the MC acts stupid, wimpy etc to bait the enemies to attack etc. It repeats over and over. Then another common thing is for some reason his organisation has to clean house very often. Somehow ppl keep betraying his group. Cliche cultivation seclusion scenes. Cliche wife kidnapping scenes. Nothing new here or done better.Long monologues without any real story progression. MC powers up suddenly every 200chaps or so but somehow never levels up during time inbetween.Dont bother.
I love the characters especially the Whole bunch from central pine faction. I LOVE Lou Lan! I like the characters of Ai Hui and Lady Shi. I am excited for the development