Now that's sakingdom building,not like some bs novel I've red it past few days
It's a pretty good novel so far, with the few chapters I've read up until now. The writing can be a tad akward at times (the way the system/ his story of reincarnation is introduced feels a bit off and akward to me), but besides that, it's pretty good so far. The story is rather enjoyable, and the setting is quite nice. It has potential, and i hope it gets even better as it goes on. There are still too few chapters to make a definite review, so i might update my review once the chapters reach the 200s. So far, it's pretty average but enjoyable.
I like the story so far, done reading the first 10 chapters. I'll continue again later. Is it a trend today that historical story's ML was always in love with someone else? ?
Your book was a delightful read. The way you developed the characters and the story was brilliant. I'm eagerly waiting for more of your wonderful work in the future.
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good story and i like hawk the mc contracted beast
I shamelessly give a review to myself. :)I plan to divide the story into two main stages.1) Apocalypse in MC original world.2) Calamity in Gondola dimension.Synopsis:After living on Gondola for fifty years, Chen Murong dies under the craw of Lucifer, one of emperor rank demons from the undead race. However, at the moment of his last breath, he activates one of his time magic spells with his most precious space gemstone. Through the spell, he wakes up alive, back in his hometown, and returns to the year before the apocalypse period began. Writing Quality: It is at least better than I thought it would be. I do fight for improvement. Please help me edit it if you have some ideas. :)Stability of Updates: I have both full-time and part-time jobs. I will try to update as frequently as possible.Story Development: The events in the past life of MC will continuously reveal little by little throughout the story.Character Design: I promise that there will be several key characters in the story.World Background: Mixing between modern and fantasy.
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I am rating this highly because i see a lot of potential if writing and world background expands. Granted we are still in the beginning so there is plenty of room for development so i am anxious to see where this piece of work goes.
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