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"I'm not a hero, I'm not a fighter, all I am is a survivor, a survivor that never showed Bravery even right from the start, I was given bravery but never learned Bravery, Bravery can never be created, I was just some piece of particles that was just a figment made to only fight and to only run away from... and now I have to waste my time TALKING TO YOU ABOUT WHAT MY FAKE ACHIEVEMENTS WERE!!!!!!... They aren't even Achievements, all the things that I and my friends did were nothing but a note taken from a child story... I'm not a Hero, and if I'm not that then what am I?Am I you now? Or am I someone who wasn't meant to be? Now I've become like you... pathetic and weak and was always stubborn with what we wanted... So tell me... what is all worth it... Aiden?"
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As of chapter 310. Writing quality is great. I think the dialogue is smooth flowing and realistic to the setting and period.Desctiptions are also niche, there's never too may unnecessary adjectives. I really love the story and there's lots of mysteries to be uncovered. The characters are easy to imagine and very diverse in appearance and personality. The powers are cool. I really like the main character. I think he's a really interesting one. I don't really know how to articulate my thoughts on him but yeah I like him and I am also fond of the supporting cast. All in all I think this is probably top 3 on the platform. ?
A hidden gem in a genre dominated by many fellow authors yet his writing skills and descriptions don't pale in comparison. The story's plot has the potential to grow far and wide if it continues at this pace. I personally liked it.
The story is interesting. This type of concept is very new to me. I have read very few stories like this. But, still I am going to look forward for the coming chapters. Keep up the good work ?
I've been following along with this story on reddit since shortly after it began, the all-around quality started off strong and has only gotten better, and it's up there with the most consistently posted of the dozens of stories I follow (the author takes the occasional break, but we get a heads up well in advance). If you enjoy fantasy that doesn't jump the shark, is willing to delve into dark topics (but not to an exaggerated or uncomfortable degree) and has excellent character and plot progression (the pacing really is superb) then be sure to give this story a chance.
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The difference is in the plot. You can feel the loom of death in this one-room thriller comedy. One of a kind in a wuxia cutivation system setting.
An interesting idea, and a strange plot so far. I think the paragraphs need short sentences and one can use the word (one) instead of he/she. Maybe you can add a bit of emotion to the characters in their time of crisis or when making hard choices. But so far, it's great on the science side, just try to put it in shorter sentences so the concept becomes clearer for your everyday readers. Go on!???
A very satisfying novel. I only tried to read it because of the title, not expecting anything at all. However, I came to like it, love it even. It is a very stable story, with a great plot. It doesn't disappoint, if you are looking for a sport novel you can read, then I highly recommend the best football novel I've read so far. The Godfather of Champions.
this is a good novel to me in every aspect hope you start back up again. this is worth five stars cant wait to see were this story goes keep up the good work
