Waaah!!!! First one to review! Wooooh! I am so happy! I love this story and finished reading in Chinese version using google translate. Its nerve wracking but its WORTH IT!!!!
no arrogant MC , no killing of entire clans,the beginning isn't quite great, but if you go past 10- 20 ch you wont regret it, a slice of life/comedy/action what more do you want?(its gold).
The Auther be licking his lips thinking of ways to Kill the MC’s firends for his character development ?????????????????????????
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Shameless personal review to get things started. what I can promise you with this novel is a dragon main character that actually acts like one, he is not a reincarnated human brained dragon with the morals of a white knight, I can also promise you excellent grammar as that is something I highly value. Furthermore the World building, character development, secondary characters and plot progression hopefully will be up to your expectations.
9.5/10 This novel is great mc slowly goes to different worlds and you can say there is two parts of this novel before and after his academy? in some world mc establishes a power that pretty great much better than sects bassicly academy for entire world sort of thing which is insanly great plus he uses tech too while it seems for some reason author locked tech to our level even though at some point thousands of years have passed but whatever there could have been isnane development there but no.While its slow there are unqiue worlds here one i found litle weird but its unique and great cant have him just going to cultivation world after cultivation world the only problem is that at some point author lowered the population of his world? before it was 100 trilion and then reduced to 3 trilion?? i feel this is mtl doing but author below said that proportion of certain realm to global population was 1:4000 and that calculation made sense? so idk what author was smoking maybe he ment 3000 trilion? but it got changed in mtl idk.Other than that his academy doesnt get much screentime which is a shame there is a litle but not enough we get few characters pov but thats it when we could have gone more plus in main world after he establish his power its not talked for long time for about 200ch? i read it would have been great if we saw how people were schocked at new power and all that and we get like 10-20 ch focusing on that but noo...other than that not much to say thats bad novel is great especially since its more like kingdom building with litle bit of tech, it would have been better if we saw more of his academy and author could have made tech better but its kinda hard to write but even then he could have for sure made it better by idk combing cultivation and tech into one in like soul chip, like brain chip but since people here have souls into a soul quantum chip but no.... 9.5/10
It has been a WHOLE month since last update ?
I pray this novel is selected I can't wait
"I'm afraid that Maria will just continue hiding in fear of being crushed by us" Pietro said smugly. He was confident that Maria was truly afraid of them, so to save themselves from further embarrassment they just hid in their Guild house like cowards.
Read it through 240 chapter, finally feels it was good chapter to give it early review. +the worldbuilding 9/10 : nicely explained throughout the the story and no unnecessary info dumps. +the supporting character 7/10 : most of them was very well introduced and some of them still carry aura of mystery to them.+the main character 6/10 : the mc (Vicente) was a neutral evil guy, he is ruthless to his enemy and caring toward his family. but he's character was sometimes feels bland like something is missing. +the plot progression 8/10 : nicely paced not too fast and not too slow but some of the subplot was really unnecessMy only gripe was in where mc and his group went to Pentagram hunting in the forest and they found the guys from magic academy who was attacked by beasts and decided to help them. no problem until this point although i prefer to let them die. but after this and up until the DEAL that he made with guy named joshua (chapter 293-240) because of pentagram that not even his was single the most idiotic and dumb deal that can be avoided. it makes me rethink all of his decision up to this point.
I’ve been reading this for a long time, the amount of growth and improvement in the authors writing throughout the chapters is very obvious. Includes plenty of popular fantasy and sci tropes but in a military setting which I haven’t seen before.
Ok, for writing quality i give 3 stars because initially the story was a bit rushed and the fact that the main character is able to fight with Rank A beast basically from the start of the story (around 17-30 ch but the story progress slowly so its basically the beginning). Then another fact is that there is a certain battle that lasted more than 10 chapters with the POV of other characters and at a certain point it became just boring, it was too damn long even if i understand what the author tryed to do which was trying to give the POV of the MC which observed the battlefiled from many "angles