The trolls writing good reviews though. Like the henyee translations version already has a manhua adaptation thats really popular, it would be impossible not to know that this story is a plagerized version of henyee translations and if not the original author too!
I'm up to date on the raws. It's not great. MC get's a busted ability early on and author has no idea what to do with it. It theoretically has a drawback, but not really so he just gets OP system+ OP talent and facerolls everyone. The main antagonist is contradictory, because he's disproportionally dumb(Like, if he was as dumb as he's written there would be no way he had his cultivation base). Main heroine is an irrelevant plot device. The biggest atrocity is the cultivation syatem. It heavily references Honghuang/Prehistoric, but doesn't explain, so if you didn't read source material you'll be confused af. Then author decides to give the borrowed concepts his own twist and power levels get absolutely incomprehensible.
Strong points:The world building is immensely fused without sounding odd or forceful. Bits of information about the world and MCs condition is given rather than shoving stuff down the throats of readers. Genderbender is handled quite well with the smooth 1st person narration (personally its second best I've read on WN) The fusion of human + animalistic behaviours and natures are....well, just amazingly simple and more 'human.' Like, you can feel the simple natural act of bees cleaning their queen/MC an intimate procedure without feeling awkward or cringe that those are bees or humanoids or whatever. Snu snu is well....HAWTT!
It looks promising, the character gives me an Overlord vibe. Taking your other works into account, I am excited on this one.
Please continue these and I accidentaly wrote my review on chapter 1. I know it has been a year since a new chapter and it was stop becuase you had a family emergency but please continue this novel. I sent a power stone and if you continue I’ll send more. please.
My favorite character here is Anna Stargaze? I really like her character growth, and I hope that she will continuously grow stronger, so Noel wouldn’t be able to surpass her hahahah. And I think the system is really a cheat? Cuz it gives power boost with missions while reincarnation gives you knowledge about the future in your previous life that might change with your actions in the current world.And please don’t let Anna fall for Noel easily. It would be better if Noel will fall for her first? I’d like to see how Noel and Anna’s relationship progress further in the future.
First of all the picture is misleading...he is not an archer, he's a martial artist. The naming sense is terrible, and there are a lot of inconsistencies like one moment the enemy is a 2nd class martial master then at the next chapter he's become a 1st class. I mean come on. It's so confusing that I got tired oF it so I just skimmed thru a lot. Full of Chinese cliche. The mc is ruthless but he's always underestimated even if everybody knows that he's op just for the sake of bullshit. It's good if you're just starting to read novels. Whats with the Chinese always 'splitting',burning,defying heaven? If the heavens could just reply back it would say 'you Chinese fcks better get circumsised first before talking about splitting me.
I'm really interested in this novel completly my type, if you know what I mean ;). It would be great if you could keep up the uploads like the last few days and increase the lenght of the capter. I will be waiting for new chapters, also thanks for taking your time to write this novel.
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It has a great first chapter! Then the cart is really pushed off the cliff, hard and fast. By chapter 5 MC has the rarest metal in the world, gear that no one else can dream of having, has the intelligence of a 5 yr old when he is 18 and has been orphaned for many years. The plot is so thick it might as well be a bulwark shield. To top it all off the writing is everywhere, very hard to read and understand.
I was really sad when this book went hiatus and I waited for the original author to pick it up again. Good thing someone decided to approach the original author.I have nothing else to say about the book. It's great and the MC is so OP and badass.