So far even though there are only six chapters at this time, the book is honestly awesome in its progression, you are doing marvelous.
The novel is what it is advertised as; a slow passed cultivation novel.
well here is my honest opinion story isn't that bad as some people are saying but it also isn't a masterpiece it's something of you can read to pass time about MC personality he is enthusiastic yet braindead he wanna do great things but is coward. Overall society is trash if you don't have powers you are trash a lot of social status differences and a few things here and there doesn't make sense still I am writing this review after reading early chapter I think it has potential but whether or not author perform good or not who knows
A villain protagonist done right.? good novel
I've been stuck on this book's early chapters for a quite long time already. And i think now is the time for us to part ways.The pros :- The mc's backstory is unknown yet he is likeable and understandable on a certain level.- The world is original.- Some might like the rather slow pace .- The mc's reaction to his reincarnation is really realistic .- A promising plot slowly unravels .- The author 's writing quality is above average( the style is not very eye-catching but it manages to keep you intrigued and there aren't many mistakes ( if any) ).- I don't know the chapters' lenght , but i can tell it must be longer than your average 1000 words on webnovel.The cons : - The characters are bland.The Mc is likeable yet somehow , he is uninteresting enough. If i'm being honest , i simply don't care enough about him , even though i know him( i've read 23 chapters already).I think this comes from two facts :First , the Mc doesn't really have any flaw he should work on( egoism , dishonesty...).Him being insecure makes me empathize with him but that's all. I do not feel really tied to him , nor does he seems realistic , since he has no bad side.And second , the mc's personality is melancholic and cold.Contrary to what people think , writing about a cold mc is really difficult , since it's hard to make him engaging. But not only did the author make him cold , he/she also used an omniscient pov , which further distances readers from the Mc. If only he had funny thoughts despite having a cold demeanor, it would have still been fine.But as i said earlier , he is melancholic. So don't expect rejoicing thoughts from him.On another point , i also don't really like how the Mc acted( in the 23rd chapter ) as though Killing was forced upon him. Emir had a choice. He could have let the hitmen go. So i don't understand why he lamented and acted as if it was forced upon him. If he acts in a certain way , he has to uphold his responsabilities. This all whinning time discredited him highly and it was even the final push for me to definetely stop reading this book.All in all , he is not irritating nor engaging. He is fine and just fine.Now for the side characters...They are forgetable( even the Mc's mother and his sister). - The pace is slow.As i said above , the pace is rather slow. And this together with the characters makes the story feels dragging.- I don't really like the book's general vibe .The book's ambiance is the reflection of the Mc : cold and melancholic. It doesn’t change one bit , and this ends up making the whole reading experience underwhelming.Finally , I pray for your improvement author and hope that my honest review does help you.
Beautiful and nice characters, I can’t wait for Chris’s happy ending
Major and constant grammatical errors that could've been fixed with a free app like Grammarly. This is coupled with a main character whose backstory is filled with nonsense filler accomplishments. Overall I could see this having potential but for now, this is not worth the time.
One of the best novels on WN. The story, the plot and the characters are exceptional. Definitely a must read! I have read up to chapter 117, author has gotten everything right in writing this. Keep adding chapters and I will definitely keep reading.
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A whole different novel about witches. The author sure does do research his materials and the terminologies that are used in the novel are quite intriguing. I don't have anything else to say and the novel is well-written and easy to understand ^_^Keep up the work, author! ^_^P.S. I put this on my lib to read further if I have time! Thank you for sharing this wonderful novel! ^_^
hahhh, good writing but a lot of plothole likeis it just to use chakra paper to check affinitybecause what i know swift release is come from lightning+wind affinityand many more plotholes
Well done to the author. Your writing style is different and lovely to read, however it has the potential to reach more readers and admirers. The author adopts an inconsistent approach to grammar and punctuation and would benefit from spacing out their moments of dialogue to provide an even powerful impact.