This book is really good and I loved the way the whole situation was put on and even I feel there is something wrong in the attic. One of the best ones I read in this month and would love to read more for the one who expressed it so well. Keep going
Hello!! First off all I very happy and pleased to seen an Indian Author, as I am a fellow Indian myself.?So, regrading the novel.TBH, have a mixed thoughts about it. I really like the Eshwar(Protagonist) and also the side character who have their own and unique personalities.Well in the end character design was good.But can't be said same for the story though.Don't get me wrong, the story is good and it has its moments, but what I am saying is the lack of confirmation from Author to the readers and it looks to much complicated.(especially his past life stuff and the reason behind his current mental problem, he will be going through occasionally)Well atleast thats what I felt or more like I am someone who prefers clarifications while reading particularly, about MC's state.Despite the above mentioned my opinion, I atleast enjoyed the novel and had a constant smile while reading through the chapters.Anyway, liked ur work Dear Author hope you will continue.Note: This review is posted after only reading 140 chapters. NOT DROOPED. Only Paused. Will continue Later.
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I See One Second Into The Future: Loner In The Apocalypse is a story about about Kairos, someone who can see one second into the future. He uses this ability in order to survive a sudden apocalyptic event, where the sun is deadly, and monsters appear.Novel had at interesting design, and the main character had a interesting ability, however there's too many things that cause you to go "that just doesn't make sense".Writing quality is pretty good. It's readable, no obvious grammatical errors or mistakes. Nothing to write home about either. (4/5 stars)Onto the story development. Like I said previously, this novel had a interesting premise, where the sun can kill you, while it creates various monsters. However, there is a downright ridiculous amount of plot holes. I'll just make a quick list.- The words "loner in the apocalypse" are in the title. This is the opposite of what happens, the main character immediately makes a party with people who he doesn't trust. Later on, he accepted someone else into the party that he himself admitted that if the guy didn't have a certain weakness, he would try to kill them all. - The main character doesn't trust his party, so he doesn't upgrade his stats to show of his strength. A few chapters after stating this, he immediately fights ten+ monsters all on his own. (They are more powerful than humans)- Main character stocks up on stat points for no reason. You cannot add stat points while in combat as it would disrupt your attention. This happens over and over. He decided to attack a group of bandits with average-ish stats (2 - 4 points in each stat) while having 20+ points that aren't allocated. - Main character fights some random chick with red hair that has a katana. After making her surrender, the main character asks for her katana. She gets a new weapon before giving it to them. Main character for some reason accepts this stupid arrangement. Then, the main character, despite literally being able to see the future, lets her take one of his companions hostage. Theres more, but I can't be asked to write about this completely illogical story. (1/5 stars)Character design. It's meh. Side characters are rather useless, not sure why the main character decided to take them in. After all, part of the title is "loner in the apocalypse". Aside from that, the main character is exceedingly stupid. Nothing he does makes sense. He accepts people he doesn't trust into his group, including people who have every reason to kill him. He decides to hide his strength, before choosing to randomly show it off a few chapters later, etc. (2/5 stars)World background is a solid 3/5. I have only read eighteen chapters so I can't say a whole lot. There isn't a terrible amount of world-building, but the amount of content before the apocalypse was rather lackluster. Not much to say here. (3/5 stars)Overall, I feel like the novel would've been much better if the author went through his novel for the ridiculous amount of plot holes. I feel like the author didn't really have a plan. I give this novel 3 out of 5 stars.
I love fantastic fantasies and colorful lands. Magic battles and at the same this dash of realism. I always love seeing new ways creators handle these types of stories. Completely immersive, it's easy to get lost in their story. I recommend this completely!
I really like the world you've formulated here, very interesting take on the rebirth/isekai genre. Seems like a very good start to an interesting story! Please keep up the good work, we'll be in your care!
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Saya sangat suka novel ini, jangan sampai berehmti seperti baisiea jancook, semoga penulis sehat selalu dan dapat membuat novel ini sampai akhir, teri.ma kasih banyak bos, telah menulis novel ini Lanjutkan
This is a transmigration novel and the mc have a system. It's somehow similar to another novel titled 'I Really Want to Go Against the Sky'. The mc continue to level up without doing anything like cultivating and such. He level up just by walking, drinking, etc.The difference of this novel is that the mc is not the only transmigrator. There are many more transmigrated people and all of them also have their own systems.I like the novel first but I got disinterested because of the way it is narrated. It's confusing. Sometimes you can't distinguish whose point-of-view you are reading.
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Not bad. I like this type of story.Not bad. I like this type of story.Not bad. I like this type of story.Not bad. I like this type of story.