Too bad though that when they got out of their house and walked through the streets, they saw a few guys billing a girl...
''Be at ease, my friend. I have stopped being a king a long time ago. Where is my granddaughter Sif or my apprentice Merry?''
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The bird stayed in the cage for a whole day, but food never came.
Didn’t I get caught in the R countrymen’s trap… Wasn’t I executed by a firing squad?>
It’s very interesting and the interactions between lu feng and an zhe was very adorable
good story and yeah the story is really good
The plot and development is very good, but the writing quality can be better, use a stronger verbs and cut the less redundant information. Also, id recomment splitting the paragraph into a smaller substance will make it easier to read. Last but not least, make the transition more concise and smoother transitions between the setting...... a Very good read tho. Id like to check your other works.
I’m so in love with this novel and can’t wait to read more . From the characters to the setting and plot twist is captivating and intriguing
Really enjoy your novel. Character dynamic is great and the interactions are fun. Creepy nursery rhymes are 10/10.
我已經被你的創作深深吸引了。從第一刻起，我就沉浸在這個故事中，感覺自己被帶到了一個新的、迷人的世界。您作為作家的才華在每一頁上都顯而易見。你描述場景、人物和情感的方式簡直是大師級的。我喜歡你發展情節的方式。它是原創的，充滿懸念，讓我著迷直到最後。毫無疑問，這部作品將永遠銘刻在我的記憶中。我再次祝賀你們取得這項偉大成就。我相信這本書會取得巨大成功，並且會吸引許多像我一樣的讀者，他們會對你的才華感到高興。
I would first like to say thank you for your hard work in making this novel and the world you have built in it. Love your novel. keep up the good work!