Comedy that revolves around misunderstandings...... this is a gold mine. Shame about the short chapters but stable updates makes up for it. TAKE MY STONES!
Quite alot of stuff surprisingly. Support +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
I like the concept, but the writing has a lot of grammar errors and missing words, so you might want to get an editor or beta or edit it yourself. Also, I got a bit confused over whether there is a difference between the original and new world? But for a non-native speaker I'm pretty impressed! I like the fact that there's a good amount of action and encounters in each chapter. Overall, good effort! Hope to see more!
interesting story, so far the development of story is good hope the next chap will not drop..keep going
Everything about this is aamazing but i only managed to get to chapter 57 before running out of fast passes and coins. Turned premium waaaay too early and the names are confusing at times but easy to get used to. Overall a 10/10. Instantly got me hooked
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Its really discouraging to see this novel becoming premium. And here i thought the translator claim to be an avid reader. I loved this novel and was the only one i enjoyed on this site. Dropping this as of this moment. The premium system is complete utter BS.
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Well,it isn't neither good nor bad. Its in the acceptable range. The name of the system or the ability of it. As far as I know,there isn't any 100 fold or whatever,just unlimited evolution.
I already wrote a review however as it seems author really wants it, I have decided to write a more detailed one.So far the story is nice and shows a lot of promise as well as some little bits of what is to come.The author is clearly still an ******* and as such I wish to cut him some slack.Try to keep it up and write longer chapters.
Finally Finished this book.Finally Finished this book.Finally Finished this book.
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