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After reading this poorly written thing, I am mad. I mean this is a copy of the legendary mechanic plot. It is very bad quality, the power system is a carbon copy of the legendary mechanic. Test subject zero, an organization that plans to overthrow the current nations. The only changes are names and monsters coming from the game after two years. The characters are copies, the world-building and plotline is a super poor copy. Even the sypnosis and chapter arent the same.
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It is a great story about gaining the most benefits from a horrible situation. It is definitely something I recommen reading. -------------------------------------------------------------‐-------
Hmm, an interesting story with an interesting MC and who seems like the FL is also intriguing though weird af, alas the story isn't advanced enough to know more yet. I will say though that there are some grammatical errors that are quite a pain sometimes, though not something that detracts from the story. I've no problem with the update stability, but the pacing seems off, like sometimes it's very fast other times it's excruciatingly slow. Also, fair warning for new readers, I believe that the author doesn't explain much of the world, background and other details that may seem important, it is frustrating af, but he seems to go by the "Give small snippets of information in time" approach, rather than explaining things sooner. As I said this is frustrating though bearable, for me at least, idk about others. Anyway, this is a story with great potential which honestly deserves a chance, though it seems to be obscured by others, I found it by accident myself.
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Aaaah... I totally love the writer of this book... and Baby Ain. ?? I started reading the book because I thought that the cover was actually very cute. You know, a cute little lady boss with large bright eyes and a totally adorable pink uniform... Who wouldn't love her? ??All Hail Ainsley-sama!!!
Alright Let's Begin,1.Writing quality is bad.It's hard to understand what's going on due time skips and grammatical errors.2.Story development so far is good.3.Character design.... how should I put this it is good and bad at the same time(What am I even writing LOL...)4.Yup, world background is pretty good.The story has potential if executed correctly dude focus on grammatical errors(They Suck)That's allBEST OF LUCK
Are people running out of ideas on how to name their main character? At first names like Alex, Desmond in eastern cultivation novels, now Hye?
It's really good if you like manipulative MCs. Not the best for people who love peace-loving and righteous MCs.
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Decent novel with typical mc as an extra in a novel. Been 6 days and there is 21 chaps. Author needs to work on the grammer and is recommended to use Grammarly. Author focus on the characters as their a bit bland. Keep it up author
a island game where u owe someone a substantial amout of money(bells) in the form of a loan for a house and have to farm,mine,fish ect to repay the loan hmmm author be honest how many hours did u put in