HeavenlyMike
This is a good read , it doesn't have a lot of conflicts . It is a pure romance between ml and fl . Don't be put off at the start , after a few page the footnotes will be gone .
Can someone explain to me how MC has so many beauties around him but still behaves like a kid. I mean did they are literally ready to do anything you want but you only want to see swimsuits.I feel like author is intentionally dragging out the romance in this story or he's just a noob in writing harem stories.
Vol 2 ch 3, can’t Xu Yi research how to make a gun, specially stuff like snipers for Agnes. He needs some personal protection for himself too and there’s no established body constitutions depending on magician level so in theory guns work on any level of magicians.
I really hate this kind of novel when the keep saying " this diety" or something like that. Make me want to punch the author
Beginning was good. But dropped the novel at chapter 20. Synopsis of the novel is not clear about the gender issue of MC. What a waste of good writing quality.
After reading to chapter 79 I have decided to drop. this story is way to boring and the mc is just... i want to say push over but he is only like 16 or 18, but idk.
Great novel... It would have been very popular, if not for locking it in such early chapters...
Close attention to historical accuracy and realism indicating deep knowledge of author in soviet politics and military with a consistently built world. Also nice reference to Call of Duty world at war.
hey a few thing i would like in the story. Just know im not telling how to write your book this is just my wants.1.i don't see a need for romance I think I just doesn't fit the feel the story has.2.i like the way your writing the book it has a show don't tell kinda thing going on.
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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
