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My review is base on what I read so far and also includes the review of some people who read in advance of this novel.
1st the novel filler is to much I mean to much to handle author just insert chapters of nonsense like it was normal.
2nd the characters are so prostrating to read. The mc was so far comical with the harem no touch attitude. If this was japanese I can understand that but as chinese novel it is a huge insult towards chinese harem. The mc womens are also hard to swallow the author seem to wanted to create a tsundare women but it mess up big time. As for the enemies imagine enemy you see at chaptet 10 or something you still see them around chapter 500. The author loves to save enemies and recycle them.
3rd story development. This one was rather good at first. But the author just love to troll and keep making the story on a never ending loop. Keep on introducing hidden story line while living them unfinished.
Finally it was a good story to pass time but a reader has a botton line as well and mine has perhaps cross it so i decide to give up and stop reading this..
You are so poor in story writing.. You keep on repeating one fact over and over again.. In a chapter only 2 - 3 character dialog.. I hate what u are doing to the character plot. Pls be creative.. I score you 1/10
its lack luster.. if you don't have anything to read then try otherwise not worth it.. there are many more novels with similar setting who have done a far better job than this
Trash translator
No hope for this novel unless the translator is changed.
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Why do all protagonists have an obsession with deafeating Buddah
MC is very naive be you can see the development and the progress he makes to improve only himself but to help those close to him although I personally would like a bit more chapters with his relationships with his loved one (female and male friends )
The chapter was good until chapter 40 but after that different words were added, it must be a machine translated text after Chapter 40.
I wont't read anymore.
What kind of recommendation is this webnovel?
I've finished all 40 chapters and it's a good novel don't get me wrong at all but there is a ton of translation errors to the point sometimes I can't understand who's who not any world development for God sake earth is called blue planet and we learn nothing about his past life either kinda kills the story but if the translation errors were fixed I think this would be at least a 4.3
Only read a few chapters, but what I can say, this book is creative. Usually I don’t pick up video game novels on here, but this one drew me in.
Galanar has a way with words and I already know the character development and action will only get better. The world building flows like a live action and I have to remind myself I’m reading.
looks interesting
I love this I hope you can update again sooner
