Same
What’s bad about that? I mean what’s the problem with that now that I see it again
boruto is shit
too much scheming less action its irritate me DAMN!!. i hate this MC
Though the title of the novel is like a third-rate novel, but the story is really interesting.It felt so realistic. It has a unique point of view.MC has cheat but not ridiculous, his cheat is just like a gentle push to help him break a wall at the last step.Unlike most asians novels where the MCs' partners/love interests become dead weight in battlefield no matter how the authors make them seem "special", described them as geniuses beside the MCs.In the end, their role in the whole story are insignificant, either becoming dead weight or "p*ssy provider" for the MCsThis novel is like a novel with 2 MCs.After they become Dao Companion, they always move together.The male MC the female MC always strive to become an all-rounder character.Among the many novels I had read, only the female MC in this novel that can be said to be a true genius beside the male MC.
Sigh..
Thoroughly enjoyable! This wholesome romance is a refreshing change, keeping me engaged without feeling fatigued by the plot. Can't wait for the next update!
Do you want mc that is cuck? Do you want yuri cuck? Do you want no real love bcz girls love yuri more than mc? read this novel
Really nice I like the characters really nice writing. One phrase Attention grabber.
Writing quality criticism:
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Character design criticism:
Readers will appreciate it if you describe how the main character looks, what he wants to do overall, and what his favorite things are. Favorite things as in hobbies, quirks, etc. In other words detail! Give me something to help imagine the scene.
Word background criticism:
What year is it? How does that time period differ? Has peoples fashion sense changed? Describe the environment in the planet. Anything else about the human culture different? Is KFC still on the downturn in the United States?!! Is the United States now called The Colnel Confederacy?
Thanks
Good story....only problem with the mc....he still acts like a beast.....Hope he will change in the future..Need more chapters to further comment....(:(:(:.......................................................
Volume 1 is good. Very good. Volume 2- A lot of chapters, do not make sense. The author went along the path of the text, for the sake of the text. Lost dynamics. Volume 2 - a snail crawling in a small circle.
The character development in Volume 1 . Volume 2- development canceled and stuck in place. They have become dumber.