wow, a very interesting storyline. i think this is the first of it's kind that i have read. very detailed in its description. captivating back stories. this invokes emotions in the readers. i hope to see more updates. keep it up
I really think this story has so much potential. I like it so far. I think if the author could improve a few things, it would be more appealing to readers. First of all, the tenses need to be unified, either past or present. Some editing needs to be done as there are many grammatical mistakes. I think there should be more character development, maybe backgrounds, goals, motivation. Something that kinda bothered me was the fact that the author uses both first and last name every time he talks about a characters. I think one is enough, also descriptions are lacking. Great work though, I am sure you will improve with time!! Gambatte kudasai!!
At first I thought this story was just a love letter to pokemon and that was fine. I enjoyed that feeling however with the start of second Dreamworld. the story has really pickup pace and is keeping me guessing.
The story is totally awesome. I totally love it. It has a nice storyline and has a good character development. I like how the story focuses more about the mc's development. And i totally ship the mc to the male lead.? all in all he story is totally worth reading for.
This novel is great and I'd highly recommend it. I don't know why it's not more popular there are plenty of books that are bad but more popular then this one.
It is original at least to me. It is mysterious and makes you wonder who the character is his past and what his future holds. The story is just beginning so can’t say much else but it has potential hope author keeps writing it and doesn’t stop.
I gave my story what i would give others. Might lack a little on development due to being a bit slow at beginning but it doesnt feel that slow. Is people are going to review, I would like constructive ones. Not random letters or words. i want someone to click on this novel and see constructive points of the good and bads not a mis match of bots for ex.
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a Really Good System Novel I will Just Stay Here And Wait for your new best chapters , PLEASE MAKE THIS NOVEL QUICK , a chapter for day please :(
This is a solid 5 out of 5 in every aspect. The writing quality is spotless and the stability of updates is perfect with 2 chapters a day. Also the story development is very smooth and enjoyable - I did not see the zombie coming (though its in the title.)
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Amazing story. There are only a few important errors in editing that can be easily overlooked and the overall quality of the story is great.