leaving this, I do not like the systems or gods that tell you what to do or punish you, basically a slave ..............................................................
Kinda crazy how every review I see rates this novel pretty highly. The world background isn’t much to look at in this novel and the pacing jumps around and is confusing. The character design isn’t much, the MC is basically a loser that doesn’t go to school so that he can game elsewhere and he gets himself into problems where it’s not his business and that he can’t back himself up. The cultivation of the novel is confusing because once again nothing is explained and somehow the MC gains a new element of magic from just repeated killing.
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Great story. The plot is very niceThe character design is almost perfect because of the mixture of teenage experiences. I think you must also make the character tougher to help with his development.The grammatical errors are alittle too much!Make sure to edit your story before you post them.However, your story is very nice and even though I don't really like martial arts stories, yours is the first one I really like.Keep I up!
why did you stop this is best of best I have ever read. I want more. ?????????????????????????????????????❤️❤️❤️❤️
this one is realllllly good..................... ......................................................... .................................
For readers who have tried to guess the storyline, thank you. But, you haven't managed to guess anything
This book is my current obsession! The storyline and characters are well done, I get caught up in it and cannot wait for the next chapter. I’m completely invested in these characters and where the author is taking us.. my number 1 guilty pleasure right now is reading this ♥️
Quite a promising start I hope the first chapter comes out soon. Other than I will try to vote once it opens for the novel. Good Luck. Chaos guide
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I was about to try reading this novel but I stopped. I had remembered that webnovel is the one advertising and recommending this novel. This novel is definitely not free.
This is the best representation of the medical genre with a system. It's kind of like Dr Ling Ran, but less 'I am too handsome' we also have interesting side characters. Just hope it doesn't become like LR and get monotonous. Hope it gets taken up