From what I read so far I like the story development and the way some of the characters interaction. The writing itself could use some proof reading or better grammar corrections since there are a lot of wrong tense usage. It’s a very relaxing read. Thank you for writing. Keep it up!
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The story is amazing and i love it ...................so please update it fast.. Thank you......TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTThank you.......
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this is the second book of this genre I'm reading. it's not my favorite genre, but every once in a while I stumble upon gems like this. flow is amazing, pace is perfect. it's amazing!added to my library and will be reading.
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my man's this is the bestest system novel I've read it coincides with my humor and total mentality including but not limited to monke simple silly humor and overall good vibes
Very interesting story that took me to worlds, places and situations I could never have imagined. Dave has to deal with Goddesses (Destiny and Transmigration), with "Random World Transmigration Act" (which I won't begin to explain), a fairy, and most importantly, Lavendar. One of my favorite lines is, "This place defies the law of... well I think it defies all of them." That is what this tale does, it defies the usual and predictable, which is one of its best features.
The main protagonist is not smart. As such, the main protagonist does not make good decisions and that contributes to a bad reader experience. For instance, the main protagonist acts really clever in certain situations, but really dumb in other situations as though he was never clever. Lots of inconsistency in main protagonists character
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Everything is impressive, no matter the quality of original work or the translation. World background is well planned, characters have their own traits and thoughts, even the rival has good skills, brainless young masters are less likely exist in the middle of the story. The worst problem is... why is it here?!!!
The Story started of great, slightly new variation on the system model and something at least moderately new. As soon as you hit around chapter 53, however, it becomes almost a chapter by chapter remake of Martial World! What happen to the world building creativitY from the first 50 chapters. Now I cringe when I see the almost whole chapter pastes of the other Story with only name and technique changes. Started out really liking this one, eager for the next chapter, but now just made me want to reread Matial World.