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A great and beautifully written novel—I find myself getting more and more addicted with every chapter! Highly recommend it to everyone!
I'd recommend reading this. The start is a bit shaky, but overall it's still enjoyable. Of course, there are still problems with the novel, but I think they are minor enough to ignore.Here are some of my personal things that I find could have been done better. 1. The world is building. I believe the world building had so much more potential. It's not bad, but it could have been way better, I think.2. The age of the characters. No matter how much I try and imagine it, a bunch of 16-year-olds trying to save the world is ridiculous. Well, this is not much of a problem, but it just felt like that one itch you can't reach.3. Honestly, the relationships. At one point, they are extremely fickle, but the next, they are so absurdly complicated that you question why they even began. MC and Maria had a good relationship until Succubus had to come in and ruin it. I'm scared my ship might sink.4. The fights. They were good, but speed was never mentioned, so I always found myself struggling to imagine them properly.As I said, these are my personal problems, and I don't think many people will have a problem with them. Anyway, all in all, I really enjoyed it. Thanks for all the hard work, author, and thanks for the enjoyable novel. I'm going to continue reading this.
Really like the overall storytelling❤️❤️❤️❤️
"Let's welcome Rioy Kiyoshi," said the person who was holding an object that could enlarge the sound.
"I was not expecting that…" he looked at zalaria. "Is it like this for all of your people?" he started to think that she was in her sixties if that was the case.
Hokage: "! 'Senjutsu chakra' you say. How where you able to tell? As far as I know one can not sense 'Senjutsu chakra' that easily, never mind the purity of it."
5.) Build a Magi workshop and my own Library of Heavens Path along with other bulings in the Pure Heavenly Posion Pearl
She was stunned and didn't know what to say. She turns around to face Samantha again with a confused look. "Huh?"
Or is it?
Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb
Only shooting stars