This story is truly amazing and has great potential.Each chapter makes you seeking more and really is a must to read.I won't get into detail, but you should read a few chapters and judge it yourself.
This novel is a very good read. The chapters are getting better and better. The individual characters are phenomenal and you'll easily get hook with some of them due to humor and unique personalities
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I've read up to chapter 125 so I'll be honest in my opinion. I really like your idea for your story, but as well as having good successes, there are also mistakes.Mainly in grammar and continuity Example: in one chapter there was a character who clicked his tongue 5 times and the sighs: (Haaaaaa) seem like screams.It is very obvious that the author knows many Japanese, Korean and Chinese novels and brought some of his strengths to the novel, but he also brought his weaknesses like the personality of his protagonist.
This is a really nice book here. Love the way it's writing is so detailed
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Wow... this is crazy shameless. well here we go.Swept it is my first effort here on webnovel and yep I am very biased.main character: Rachel is pretty lazy, but she is chosen and is about filling duty even though she would rather just be somewhere else. Even though she does like to feel internal emotion she still finds the time to anyalizes the behavior of those around her (internally of course). is she arrogant? a bit. Is she overpowered? definitely and all of it is innate which will probably annoy many.the place: well that is super complicated. what can I say I am a complicated writer. she is from Trannisa it is a core realm with the Zala dimension. it is not a planetary realm but instead has floating land masses within an illuminated blue sky above a black "abyss" that is not an abyss. you gotta read it to understand it darling, sorry. but Trannisa is her home and she protects it. maintaining a crazy balance that she needs to continually re-evaluate. Don't worry about the five stars I gave. I already said that I was biased and we gotta start somewhere. how do I look giving myself one star. you would think I had low self esteem.read it. tell me what you think. keep my stars high or break my heart. either way I appreciate all comments and reviews.
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
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Author here?, I'm a new writer who's trying to share his imagination with everyone and make his book land itself a good recognition☺️ in webnovel. That won't be possible without you?.Why don't you check it out ?? and give me your feedback?.
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I am getting more intrigued the more i read. please update more chapters