Awesome novel.There are very few novel, which attracts my attention in this genre.It was hilarious and It was rate for me to get so much into it.Yeah, I think has a bit of problem with his tenses and singular and plural words.But I think it would improve overtime.Just don't drop it
The things the Author said he was going to write in this is not okay. Nobody want to read about Rape and other ugly sides of society, We come to read and get away from reality.
the novel could have been good but the repeated use of cliches young masters made it bad it also did not help that the mc has a brain the size of a peanut
This is seriously great. I like the way you manage to show Kye's sadness and anger, as well as how you introduce the universe. Everything is fluid and didn't disturb my reading time. Let's see what you will write later
I don’t like the cliche trope of killing the mom of in beginning. Sure it’s an easy way to make the reader sympathetic for the protagonist and give him a purpose but I didn’t personally enjoy reading about another character being tortured this way for the sake of the plot for no real reason. I did enjoy the monster-human interaction intricacies so good job on that should focus in more on that in the future.
THIS IS AN ACTUAL REVIEW WITH DETAILS AND SUMMARY. READ IT. PLEASE NOTE THAT THIS WAS WRITTEN FOR THE NEW RELEASE NOVEL AND THEREFORE IS ONLY UP TO DATE ON THE MOST RECENT CHAPTER (14).Tags: Male Lead; Magic; ?Age Rating: 12+ - No strong language thus far in the first 14 chapters, but violence is likely to occur and there has been some slight horror themes.Summary: A man calling himself Jon is transported to a different world, carrying with him only a plant and the object used to transport himself there- the Alien Eye. The noble Padt Family saves him from his near-death state and takes him in, offering him a job as a fruit grower. This is not his story. Twenty years later, Viscount Noah Padt, the man who originally took in Jon is dead, and his eldest son Leon Padt stands to inherit. Angor Padt, the younger son, has been mentored by Jon, and learned of a strange place called "Earth." However, Jon, at a mere fifty-some years of age, is withering away. He tells Angor that "Gaia's Will," or the will of this world, is rejecting him for not being originally from there. When Count Eton comes through, seeking the "Morning Dew," or a tea made from the plant Jon had brought with him, a wizard is accompanying him. Wizards are the stuff of myths and legends, but this one reveals himself for the Morning Dew. After it helps him achieve a breakthrough, he offers the Padts one favor. Though Angor first tries to save Jon, the wizard fails. Instead, Angor asks for the oppurtunity to become a wizard. During his testing, it is revealed that Angor does indeed have the necessary talent.Translation Quality: 5/5: There are no obvious grammar or spelling errors, and everything seems fine.Stability of Updates: 4/5: Hard to judge. I'm giving it a 4/5 since we can't tell this early on in the translation.Story Development: 5/5: Already interesting and unique. Instead of centering around the transmigrator (Jon), it instead follows someone else who is trying to save him. A refreshing change from the multitude of reincarnation/transmigration/time travel stories on Webnovel. Additionally, the story seems to be avoiding most the extremely obvious cliches, such as a family drama over the line of succession (that we see in almost EVERY female lead novel and quite a few of the male lead novels here). In fact, this line is stated by two servants talking about the line of succession since Leon will inherit everything: "Those family conflicts you read about in the drama novels won't happen here."Character Design: 5/5: Characters are unique and have their own personalities. Also, people can CHANGE THEIR MINDS. Wow. Mindblowing! The wizard, who originally planned to burn down Padt Manor in search of the Morning Dew, changes his mind and later offers them a favor when they give it to him out of their own goodwill.World Background: 2/5: As soon as the wizard comes, we discover there's a whole other larger world out there. ...this is honestly so overused. Main character coming from a tiny backwater? Discovers powers? It's extremely cliche, and I expected better.Overall: A nice change of pace from most of the cultivation novels here. I will note that it does seem to have some cultivation aspects, with breakthroughs and ranks for the wizards. I will continue reading this!Please like this if you want to see more actual review and not just "Guuuuuuuddd" or "Ugh terrible" in the review sections! Also note that this is an early review supposed to give people an IDEA of what the story is like, and that there are only 14 chapters out!
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Finally reached the 20 Chapters mark.Arc 1 is almost complete, only a few chapters left. Next up, 50 Chapters mark.Thanks for reading so far. Hopefully, there'll be some power stones soon.Lots of love.
Good job - I really like it) I think you should pay more attention to the small things of society in different countries and more about the world itself. This is reasonable because fan fiction on Reverend Insanity will only be read by fans. I hope your main character will be ruthless and ruthless like Fang yuan. Please no harem and no romance.And so I like the story!)
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I decided to write a real review, this book is a hidden gem. More people should read this book, the protagonist is top-notch when it comes to shamelessness. I hope the author keeps up with his wonderful work and does not drop this book.
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