Ive got to say the sex scenes in this novel are pretty well written. Very little actual sex being described but its still pretty nice to read.
I swear to fucking godI'm losing my fucking mind reading thisThe present tense used is so fucking irritatingI really tried, after 6 chapters, the tense is so shitHonestly, the plot is gud and shitI see so much potential but i can't, like the grammar is so fucked
4th chapter already trash lmao 5g an average human can’t walk and author really said blood flows up into the brain in 5 times GRAVITY
Bro this Mac is a fucking idiot he keeps plotting remove plots on people who killed him in the simulations and that causes like half his problems. Also he keeps acting super arrogant to the point where he acts like the biggest once l ever holy shit man
Really love this novel. Short and satisfying. Not all the love story needs thousands of chapters to plot against FL and ML. Just getting a chance to get the man who loves you back ,learning from the mistakes, not to repeat them and living your life with your love till the end.
"Alter Organs"Damn, don't search Twitter for that (or do)
Tried reading this.
Ran into the fact the System is called The Hate System or whatnot, and Completely and Totally lost all interest in this book.
Hate System? Seriously? That's not even funny, mate.
It reminds me of The BulletToTheBrain System a Canon Fodder character had - until they used it.
The translation quality is quite excellent for an edited MTL, and the writing itself is also superb. I love how far thinking the author is in his worldbuilding, but a necromancer who derives his power from a forest he created is interesting, as he has to become a hero and defend the city he's stationed in. It's worth checking out.
Hi, Sand Kastle here!
it's a wonderful story and has nice plot. read the former one and it's good and definitely recommend. Keep trying author. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
Beautiful and want more the writing and the details are to the poi and don’t leave me confused and annoyed love this!
The agenda of a young university student:
He always carries the family legacy with memories of his parents and siblings.
Marking the daily life of his new status. Each chapter is more active and the romance... arrived!