This is worse than terrible. There is no point to the story almost all the way up to twenty chapters. User unnecessarily writes about a great many scenes in many countries with no purpose what so ever. The government scenes are supposed to add a great twist, but all they ever do is increase speed by a little. It's like author imagines him self writing a master piece by borrowing many cliches. At the end of the day, result achieved is a thousand unrelated little pieces scattered all over resembling trash.
I will tell you, this is interesting Novel, a bit confusing at first, and you feel like kill the MC, but is getting better when you read more chapter. In short word if I too describe is from MUSIC TO DARK SIDE DETECTIVE. Well our MC is strange his developmant never change his strong vision.Good side - Thriller- Mystery- Music - from weak to strong- well backgroundBad side- the author love use analogy or methapor like hyperbola (it make you dizzy at least it just first chappy)- this is not for beginner readerSo have you thought this novel too? Well even a bit bad in the first chappy, this novel I recomended for you who love strong fantasy story with mystery that make you want to dig and dig again.
perfect blend of action adn romance love the story so far the narration is THE perfect keep it up author gonna wait for more chaps and stock them up to read later
This is a masterwork novel and there's only a few like it in my opinion.The start of the novel is normal and maybe can be considered as boring but for those who decide to continue they will find the hidden treasure here...The MC is very powerful
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you definitely have talent I recommend you keep writing although you have room to improve but doesn't everybody. I can safely say as well you are much better than me so keep it up.
So far the greatest thing about this novel is... Honesty.. On what the author wants to see and the theme of the novel.I mean. There is no diluting .. No like waste of time.It's still what some may call cringe worthy but i don't care.It's like a drawing of something good but.. i I mean the "technique" still has a lot space to develop.Emm. Man don't worry about critiques.. the way to grow as a writer is to basically; actually write what you want to see. But author. Keep it up. If this is not the last thing you write. And your keep your words honest. You gonna improve. A lot. In the best.
The mc is intelligent and cunning, doesn't let himself be overcome with emotion. So far a good story, sadly the update are slow. Im happy to have found someone that is taking the time in translating this story so slow or fast I don't mind as long as they keep it going. Thank you.
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loving this novel's story and world , wish i could go there myself , the author is obviously very creative , imaginative and intelligent to have created this fine work of art , hopefully he will continue to write this legendary masterpiece
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This brother greets the author. The author, other than being a hater of using gaps between sentences and being hated by Wn, not being allowed to get his book voted at times, is really putting hard work to make the background interesting but with a mysterious vibe that makes you want to know what else there is to the world, the characters are also better than majority of novels, please keep up the hard work with this chuuni love child of yours.