This story has an interesting premise, and after reading a few chapters so far, I can say that I like the direction it is going in. There aren't many mistakes, and the ones that are there, it'sminor. I also like the MC of the story, the concept, and the setting, especially the world building. Overall, it's going well so far, keep up the good work and good luck!
A really interesting novel, a romance with mistery and investigation a mix that i really like, when i start to read it i didn't expect this. I hope the story will go on also after the graduation ?
It's amazing, simply the best i've read.
Amazing plot, interesting beginning, wonderful character depth. keep up the good work.
So far this story it's going so good and interesting. Can't wait for the main leads to be together. I could envision every chapter in my head. Keep up the good work and upload another one soon.
Its an interesting story with fantastic plot and loveable characters. Whats there not to love in this story? I usually don't read original works but I can make an exemption for this one. Keep up the good work!
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Hey... Like your story... it's a good read... Just think you need to add more details about the world. I start to crave it by the third chapter, and without it I don't really understand the explanations about the 'old monkey'.Even a few sentences in the second chapter about 'this world... is this...'a lot less direct then what I just wrote, but keep going!without the world the details don't mean as much... if I knew where the 'old monkey' was from, even a few words after the word monkey, I would understand where they met, and know more about the story...
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This book got me excited from the first chapter. I like romance with a fighting that uses martial arts. Also the female being the rich and intelligent one. This book as all my likes.
content of the novel is nice. suspicious contention and understood. i like the way writer tried to present the theme. best of luck for your participations
this book is amazing. it has a great start that draws you in and the author tells the story from the best perspective. I can not wait to see what happens next good job author keep it up.