I like the way this novel was written, the wonderful works and story background. I can't help but admire the author, To author: work hard, I'll be following your work from now on.
this novel has alot of potential like the persone behind the system or smth or the org in the world fighting for gate of babylon with help from another branches from another world while crating human hibrids with humans inside aswell and creating a power house empire or race in the univerice fighting against a diffrent dimention or so on .
Written after chapter 108 :I found something great in this story. Something I didn’t know I missed, something I wasn’t looking for, but something I needed :The MC plays a MMORPG, with a GROUPu202f!!!(of soon-elite-to-be-players, of course but nonetheless)Yes, I know, incredible right ? but having so many stories in online-game-settings, ending with the OP-MC soloing everything by himself, becomes boring…And yet here you are, a story where the MC falls in a prison of sort, with fellow inmat…sorry, members following, having to build a team to get out of here, in a kind of good-feeling-village settings.And I have great hopes for what will follow.I hope that this village-feeling won’t disappear later on, and that the relationship within the group will be reinforced.And I also liked the MC calling his best friends to share his OP-discovery to play together.That’s how you are supposed to play such games…Oh, and we have real IRL city names for the IRL parts, which is way, way better than the usual « X city » and such.Notes :Writing Quality : 4,5/5=> here and there some missing words and some typos, the writing-style is good for meStability of Updates : 3/5=> my fan-thinking is taking the better of me here and I NEED the rest of the story right now y’know ? hence the harsh note. But I understand that quality takes time, so…Story Development : 5/5=> so far so good, a good balance between IRL and in-game storyCharacter Design : 5/5=> the MC story and personality is credible for now, the IRL shows some real nice things, I like it. The group is being built right now and I am eager to know who will be the next members :-)World Background : 5/5=> Real city names. Period.
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I read this book on a whim bcuz the plot summary was interesting....but only after reading quite a few chapters i was completely hooked....the story is interesting even though bcuz of too many avatars of the MC the plot sometimes get a bit confused but as i progressed reading some duobts are cleared while even more confusions aroused which i guess will be cleared gradually as the story progressed....the characters are quite good...like Lirian, Taliyah, the emperor, the avatars with their specific quirks even though not all of them are introduced properly and also character of Anya....they are all quite nicely developed...the setting of the world or the realms or plains is also explained properly but the only issue that i have with this novel is that i couldn't get my head around the various stages of cultivation that is mentioned here....they are a bit messy and not clear enough otherwise i like the story very much n that egoistic, narcissistic,proud, vain, mad character of Lirian is very interesting to read n abt his struggle with his loneliness n all pain and loss that he endured.....so yeah keep uploading new chapters n keep up the good work ????
interesting, albeit slightly flawed read. Steve includes the good and the bad. The flaw is including crude stories including one where a waitress flashes him her chest only covered with whipped cream. That simply serves no purpose besides shock value.A strength is his inclusion of specifics about the restaurant business. Most authors do not include hard operating numbers and advice in a narrative book. He does and it is extremely useful information. I found those details are comparable in less words to books I have read devoted entirely to running the business.He nails it on the head when talking about going the extra mile for your guests. His philosophy and stories reminded me of Nordstrom’s commitment to unexpected service, even when it is not even related to the core business.Summary: Worth the read. Great for the business details and advice.
good good good! just hope there's fewer none sense. man of few wordsman of few wordsman of few wordsman of few wordsman of few wordsman of few words
Luigi.
overall its good but there is a problem the numbers!! its so annoying what are you making is a novel not a bibble with chapters! sad but will drop.
Well, interesting start and intriguing plot but you just made me give my pet a look that said “you are not going to turn on me, are you?"??
Great work author, I love the story pacing and the scene setting too I can definitely see a lot of potentials so I'm wishing good luck.
Surprisingly a hidden gem , this novel has a different out look on cultivation where it's a modern society however there exists demons and stuff *small spoilers* a sole exorcist is sent to this world to cleans it of demons and monsters while spreading the art of exorcists / cultivation . He has a system but rarely uses it and he himself is kind of shrouded in mystery as its often hinted that he's not human but something else .This novel is kind of like the series of Supernatural , it's overall an amazing read
The story takes on a heavy dnd focus so if at any time your confused u can always look it up on Google. The story ad resurfaced on webnovel after a two year hiatus because it loss the voting poll, some of the translations are incorrect but it's not hard to follow if u have the patience to read through. From where I'm at in the story I can honestly say it's not a bad novel and would recommend to anyone that likes dnd or is at the very least interested in it.