Very good story. The side characters are all charismatic and the ML is very well developedAlthough it has a slow pace, the plot leaves you wondering about it's misterys. Besides, I think there are some hints about some bigger plot running on the background.Overall, it's a nice story, it's really hard to stop reading after you starts. Really worth the reading.(Chapter 81)
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If you are looking for a tbate clone this is the book for you. But to be completely honest you’d be better rereading tbate. It doesn’t have a majorly different plot, so you basically already know everything that is gonna happen. Also it doesn’t do anything better than tbate only worse. The pacing is very off. It will introduce pieces of the plot that happened in tbate but it won’t go into nearly as much detail or spend as much time on it. Like the academy. Nothing substantial happens at the academy. It is like Hi ADADEMY time!! Ohhh they had classes 1 year later bad thing happens and academy ends. However, even though I have been dragging this book through the mud it isn’t a bad book. I mean I read it, but it just set my standards too high by comparing it to tbate. Like it has the plot elements and characters similar to tbate, but it doesn’t have the essence of what makes tbate tbate. Tl;dr: It shouldn’t of tried so hard to be like tbate, but still miss the mark.
Very good premise, and the story started out strong. As it goes, however, the story becomes extremely frustrating to read. The main character's decisions seem forced and pretty obviously non-optimal given the information provided. Not to mention weird inclusion of a gun that seemed extremely out of place and forced for no reason. Also, every character besides the MC seems to be omniscient, as they either already have all the MCs info, or gain it nearly immediately. MC seems to simultaneously have amazing cheats and yet remain infuriatingly underpowered despite obvious methods of powering up. Dropped bc it legit made my blood pressure go up. I wanted to like it so badly, but I just couldn't. Huge disappointment.
Ibreally likebthis novel.Tbh the amount of breastmilk the mc is getting is kinda ridiculous. But i love the mc so it's kinda okay. Finally a novel where not betrayed pro player reincarnates to play game with his outstanding martial arts and in game knowledge. But an old man who we dont know anything about. I mean seriously. How can he fight so well?
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