You have certainly piqued my interest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!×!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!jfurjrkrheiejrjrfenej2osirj2mdhdg
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Author keep going please dont give up i am hooked on this story and cant wait to read more may tour story bring in more views and moeny for yoj
the writing is pretty bad.. some mistakes and author uses abbreviations a lot.. he uses "ofc" instead of "of course" and "cause" instead of "because" which are not good english.. it's okay to use in spoken english but not in written english.. especially in a novel.
Wonderful story...❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️??????????????????????????????
This book is supremely well written. For someone who has trouble writing action scenes, your book is much better then many books on this platform. Many things like grammar and spelling are done very well. One thing would be some logic holes, but they are very small, and don't affect the story. I really hope that you are able to continue updating and adding new chapters, as the first 20 are really great.
This young man chooses weather!!!!!!!!!
So far I read, it's a great story, full of mysteries about Taylor and his strange dreams. As far I read, I think he has a system, plus his wicked dreams and gloomy personality. The writing quality gets better with chapters, and I want to know what is happening to Taylor, so I will add to my library and read it later.Good work author.
There's a saying in life "If it's not broken why fix it?! But clearly you just threw it out the window by rebooting an already good story with a 4.7 rating and 1.1 million views. I'm still going to give this a chance but I really don't expect good things.
When i saw the cover ,I honestly thought this will be a cheaper version of The beginning after the end. But damn was i wrong. Although it is very similar to it at the beginning, it starts to become completely different after the adventurer years arc.
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This is really bad.