Masterpiece, keep it up author
nice story
You should have wrote wars, guns and bombs and millions of dead bodies all over the city..hahaha!!! You love making the villains so smart just to make the story long and nonsense..Why don't you just kill Luna to make it realistic she's dumb here anyway..
it's so dope
love it so much
So far I like this story.
this book is in the app Dreams
A phenomenon book. Everything is so vivid and the plot is amazing. Great job
I love this story. It does jump a bit sometimes though and you realise that you’ve forwarded in time, a few days or weeks here and there, it’s not clear when that happens. That being said I can’t wait for the rest of the story, I was gutted when I realised it wasn’t finished. Please hurry!
Nice novel but emotional
This story is going well
Such an amazing author! Amazing story too.
Every character is important. Emotions are properly conveyed. Words and spellings are good too. The plot of the story is intriguing too. Can't wait to see how this ends.I recommend! It'll totally be worth your time. Promise!