Great Story and well written. I definitely recommend it. The book is written in proper English which can be hard to find in this app.
I loved this book. The grammar and English were great. I’ve partly read and quit several books on there that were literally unreadable. I got a little confused on Andrea’s family not knowing Stefano but it was explained later.
Dear Author, can you please check chapter 157? I don’t think it is the right one as it is not connected to chapter 156…
This was hard to read. The POV’s change multiple times during a chapter even to unnecessary side-characters. The change of scenes from one sentence to the other is also disturbing making the chapter not flow smoothly. There is too much story telling and little actual conversation.
The storyline and plot is different from those I am used to and unique, how fast do you update author?
The dialogue in this opening is sharp and each character has a distinct voice, which is impressive for a first chapter. Qi Lian's lines immediately paint her as practical and slightly sharp-tongued—'We can't just watch Little Sister stay unconscious like this and do nothing! And don't you dare say this in front of Mother'—you can hear her exact tone, that mix of frustration and fear. She's not a villain, she's just a sister-in-law worried about money and survival, which makes her more human. But Luo Jinyu's dialogue is where the author really shows her skill. Every word she speaks is calculated performance. 'Kind Auntie, thank you for saving me'—the kowtowing, the trembling voice, the fabricated story about escaping human traffickers. And then the masterstroke: 'I couldn't help but think of my own mother… Unfortunately, she passed away from illness.' This is weaponized vulnerability. She's not just lying—she's reading the room in real-time and deploying exactly the right emotional trigger. The fact that Tian Denghua almost says 'poor child' shows how effective it is. Song Yanyan's internal monologue is hilarious and relatable though. Her thoughts like 'This wretched girl doesn't have a single word of truth in her mouth!' and 'Ha! She talks a good game now, but if my mother really believes her, she'll just be waiting to be liquidated later!' give us this wonderful modern voice cutting through the historical setting. The contrast between her internal snark and her external weakness (she can barely speak) creates constant tension. Tian Denghua's dialogue is warm and earthy—'I told you to be steady and careful, but you wouldn't listen!'—she sounds like a real mother, scolding out of love and fear. The author never lets any character sound like a plot device.
I dropped this. The ML keeps forcing himself on the MC in a way that becomes annoying after a while. We are constantly reminded that the MC is young (18), and while I don't mind an 18-year-old being paired with someone older, I don't like being repeatedly reminded of his age as if he were younger than that. I don't think the age difference was significant enough to warrant such constant emphasis. Additionally, the MC lacks depth, and his lines don't vary much.
I may not share the same view as those who criticize, but I genuinely believe this novel is absolutely fantastic! Admittedly, the protagonist's overpowered nature and large harem might irk some readers, but for me, that just adds to the charm. His power isn't handed to him effortlessly; he faces challenges and even comes close to death at times. And regarding his harem, he's not your typical harem protagonist – he primarily focuses on one love interest and actively tries to prevent others from developing feelings. Of course, a harem still forms, but it stands out as unique compared to others. The fantasy setting is incredible, with thrilling action, heartfelt romance, and a gripping plot that sets it apart from many Japanese novels. So far, this is my favorite. Yes, better translation could be an improvement, but overall, it's a masterpiece. I wholeheartedly recommend it to fans of fantasy, harem, or OP main characters. This novel holds a special place in my list as my top choice – it's simply 100% awesome through and through!
TF happened to this novel?
This book is fantastic! The main character (MC) faces immense challenges due to his low stats, and he ingeniously employs his gaming expertise to overcome tough opponents. There are also humorous moments that resonate with readers, especially when the MC cleverly exploits game mechanics during grinding sessions for experience. What I particularly appreciate is the character development of the MC's disciples; they evolve significantly throughout the story. And there's a surprising twist towards the end, revealing that the game world they thought they knew is actually much deeper and different than anticipated.
Not bad..like it, if u guys have more novels like these then pls tell me below
Rip me this site is 4 chapters behind, may be worth it tho for the dark theme.