He smiled and then realized that humans could not do this so fast so everyone must be doubting them, they had to get through the rest of the party perfectly so no one's doubt aggravated. He then excused himself and pulled Cavin by his arm, taking him to a quiet and empty corner, he scolded "What were you doing?"
Love had a big smile plastered across her face, she was ecstatic at the new development she saw today. Her dark purple eyes where shining with excitement.
You can do it, push 1 more chapter ?????
"Dammit a month? I can't wait that long."
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"I thought I told you to stay in the kitchen!" Aaron grumbled, fingers itching to pinch the bridge of his nose. Releasing his fingers, he found Jackson staring at him as well. It seemed like introductions were in order.
Character Design is really not bad also the story is interesting world background is not cleared for me yet , story Development is what make it interesting, those who who like TEM will also lile this story, until now there is no harem (ch 17) which is cool for me , also there is a possibility that the mc will love (0.9%) i don't think that there is a problem with the translation quality, just hoping for someone to clarify the classes the ranks of magicians and warriors. Looking forward for the storyline developing.What i like about this story- appears to be realistic about the human nature (opinion).- the story have potional (opinion).- the mc is cool af (fact)- the mc is a malble character. - the idea of the settings of this story.When we will see a glossary for the novels ???
Invisible dragon:uuu…no! it's a lie! i can't believe it!
At the start its interesting, every chapter is good and the plot is moving.Later, Its extremely slow and often boring chapters like Sila's gaining control episode, it took 4/5th of the book for Skullius to get blue core when his decision has been mentioned 200 chapters ago. The writer is making the plot too complex for its own good, Adding unnecessary boring events between interesting plot events.
This is really a good novel. I like everything about it: storyline, world view, beautiful women, character development etc. I will recommend everyone to read this.
Chapter 33 reviewI like the execution of the story and the use of the everyone’s a lord trope. I also like the limitations given to the MCs super OP ability as well. However the MC has to be the stupidest most uncreative person taken to this world which makes it hard to push through the chapters. I know that the author has said that he is new to the world and doesn’t know how to use his abilities but the way the story is going I don’t see him getting better. ‼️SPOILER‼️For instance he uses the internet to get ideas of what to create in this world, ??u200d♂️ come on now.Despite the flaws I will continue to read to see if this idiot gets smarter and to follow the progression of the story. Overall pretty good job author, keep it up.
The best non protagonist novel. It's plot is amazing. I love novel very much. Now, thanks for inspiring me Author laoshi. It helped me alot in my story's plot