hmmm... This is a nicely written, well-thought out world that the author has created here. The way the character interactions go is satisfying and refreshing compared to other similar reincarnation or transmigration stories. It is a good read if u r looking for some magic and isekai action, but since the author is new to writing, I would advice being lenient with some stuff. For the Author: You are doing a good job so far and I hope u keep improving and providing us with attractive chaps
although I'm disappointed with the mc scammy attitude towards an all powerful amnesiac who will utterly destroy him with just her breath when she gets back her memories, the rest of the story is engaging enough, hope this gets picked up
Lol the title are kind of misleading. Although our dear MC are indeed a CEO though.Only for a couple chapters.Anyway, the grandma are my favorite char. And I am unsure if the 'gift' from Grandma got used at all or not lol...Anyway, here is 5* because I enjoying the story
this story is honestly weird... a dude gets a system that allows him to bring whatever technology he wants to the past in order to help his country, Commonwealth or Poland, to become a world power. The author is clearly patriotic towards his country, and keeps saying how living in modern times is worst than in the past. I honestly don't understand how he keeps this reasoning. He talks as if the world stole everything from Poland and that modern society is inferior or wathever he cooks up. He's even weirdly patriotic to a supposed country that collapsed about 200 centuries ago. He keeps saying that modern people have lost all morals and that people in the past were more honest.
This was a new read for me, this was an extraordinary and wonderful novel. The vocabulary and writing proficiency was supremely promising from the author. keep it up!