Great story and characters.
I absolutely loved this book! it's definitely a must read!!
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Excellent so far
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The book was excellent and very enjoyable to read.
Need more chapters
Really good. I need more
very interesting premise. reminded me of MH370. the mystery and intrigue behind the storyline will definitely hook more readers' attention. great job on the pacing as well! the narration was pretty good and the main characters also seem interesting. overall, a solid start
Getting hotter
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I originally created an account specifically because this story, I just hadn't been able to formulate a proper comment since that time.
I originally wanted to be since and fair when talking about this story... but I can't. The longer I've waited to write this, the more my disdain for this story has grown, to the point I'm making this comment now in hopes of it still being somewhat based on the story's own merit and not my own disdain.
Disclaimer, I stopped reading at Chapter 943, take this review with a grain of salt. I'll also avoid specifics, keeping this relatively vague.
The world building is messy.
The system itself is filled with so many glaring contradiction that, at many points, it feels as if the author forgot previously established knowledge.
The main character is hollow, relying on plot armor so think, you'd be forgiven for mistaking it for his skull.
The side character are a mixed bag, some are good, some are awful.
Worst of all, in my opinion, are the awful plot twists.