So far, very intriguing story, very gripping and leaving readers for more! Please continue to write! The flow is ultra smooth and the linguistic-wise, it's well-written!
Happy Writing, I am waiting to finish this story....
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yeah not really my type of novel ?I'm out
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My Favorite Book Ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I absolutely love the way Yato is written he seems so humanish ! His attitude and the way he interacts with others never come off as too arrogant or hateful. He feels like someone who was truly meant to exist in the Bleach universe—if that makes sense. His personality is a solid 1000/10, and I’ve never seen an OC written so well!Also, I really hope Rukia ends up as the love interest!The only thing I have a slight complaint about is the lack of details about the Yato's original world. Hey, Moongetsu, will we ever get a chapter exploring his past attachments? Did he have close friends, parents, or anyone who still remembers him? I’d love to see a chapter showing how his family and friends reacted after his death—it would add so much depth to his story.
Amazing book so far! Loving this story! Am dying for chapter updates though! Really looking forward to reading more!
looks like a fanfic of eleceed ngl but still a decent read ig.
This was the most emotionally damaging story I ever read in my teens that shaped my personality a lot. There were tears enough to fill a pool along with laughter that could echo hundred and hundreds of miles.
11/10, would devote my entire life to reading this. If I could be teleported into this story, I would but like..as a bystander maybe, someone who just watches everything happen. The scenes are described extremely well just as the characters and the fights are the chefs biggest kiss ?? . The suspense and anticipation between chapters and events are not too long nor too short which keeps me hooked and wanting more without feeling overwhelmed. Am excited to see how everything continues to go on.
This novel really surprised me, AHH, the characters are too cute, why do you make them suffer so much f** you author, let them be, what did they do to you? Why are you like this?
The Su Huajin subplot is where the real tension lives, and I am HERE for it. She finds out Zhao Xuanzhen carried Su Wantang back to Cuiwei Pavilion at midnight. Two full hours. Two. Hours. The gold hairpin twisting out of shape in her hand—that single detail tells us more than any internal monologue could. Her face looking "almost distorted" in the mirror? Chilling. Cuihuan tries to comfort her by saying maybe he just wants an heir quickly, and honestly? Su Huajin wants to believe that. She has to. Because if it was just about producing an heir, she still has her position. But we KNOW it wasn't just about that. Zhao Xuanzhen's behavior—the frantic energy, the scratch marks, the fact that he carried an unconscious Su Wantang back to her quarters himself—this is something else entirely. Meanwhile, Su Wantang is sleeping until noon, feeling "thoroughly refreshed," completely unaware of the storm she's caused. The contrast is almost comical. She's playing a dangerous game and she doesn't even seem to realize how dangerous it is. The stakes keep escalating: Su Huajin's position is threatened, Zhao Xuanzhen's self-control is crumbling, and Su Wantang is walking around with this secret advantage while everyone else is falling apart. And we're all just waiting for the other shoe to drop. What happens when Su Huajin confronts her? What happens when the Prince finds out? The tension is absolutely unbearable and I need the next chapter immediately.