HarleyDB
What's your verdict?
I’m stacked 400 chaps and I can’t remember the peoples names or where I stopped smh , do I really start again, probably skim through again d*mn, I promised myself I wouldn’t do it lol
**No spoilers**
Important part first, if you can get passed the rough outline of the ending it really is a good book and is still worth a read.
Love the story and the concept, could tell he really had a good idea of where he wanted to go with it and enjoyed writing it. My only gripe is the ending, you can tell that he ran out of juice and it didnt seem like he was enjoying the process anymore. I really hope he comes back and rewites the ending at some point. The beauty of a web novel is it can awlays be changed and updated.
The ending clearly shows how he wanted it to end it, and it has a solid structure. But it does feel like it was rushed a bit. That being said it really just needs a polish. I plan on rereading it again, and I really do hope that someday he revisits this book to give it the ending it deserves.
I really love how different this concept seemed to me. From the beginning u can tell dt drama is truly about to unfold. Looking forward to seeing mysteries getting unveiled and how Zara will get out of all this. Really hoping to see her live no matter what☺️☺️☺️???
This story has a lot of potential! Synopsis is really good that i couldn't help but go and read it out of curiosity ?. The first chapter started off quiet atmospherically though recognising the MC was very easy. Then, we meet the legendary mentor and the MC's journey to greatness begins!
Want to know more and the details in between? Read the novel real quick, what are you waiting for?
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if you fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
Nice cover art.....all that is needed is an actual story to go with it.
shameless author here and not gonna lie , ARC 2 is crazy?
Love the story and need a part 2
Good read so far
Good plot & interesting too.
But I wonder how often the author update new chapters.
Loved it!! I hope you continue the series
