Im giving this work a 5 stars :)
Kyrie hits best! ...
We always fall for the ones we don't expect. The title and cover speaks for themselves and the plot of this story is one the best!!
Please write more than one chapter. I had to go back a few chapters to remember the storyline Please post more chapters and finish this book.
story is fabulous
lovely story
This is a cool story. Well done! :)
Why are the books that seem that they would be interesting so long? The blurb sounds interesting but then the book is too long. Not going to waste my $ on it.
BEST FICTION EVER!!!
On Date Gone Wrong- your relationship is defined, Serena. you told him you liked him more than just as a friend, and in return he asked you out in front of your friends. so how is it not defined?
What a beautiful story! I had no idea there were so many types of clouds with names like Asperatus. It's fascinating how each one has its own charm, both scary and stunning. I've always cherished cloudy days, especially when combined with rain, just like the atmosphere described in the novel. Recalling my childhood, my sister once playfully asked for her number in the rain, which seems so innocent now. The boy's persistence was amusing, even if it was a bit comical.
The love story in this novel starts off slow, but don't rush through if you're like me; you might regret it. The main character (MC) experiences a series of unfortunate events, from a car accident to a hearing loss that ends his singing career. The young motorcycle-riding male lead (ML), who appears tough, is deeply devoted to his younger sister and eventually falls for MC.
Their relationship begins with subtle glances and a touch of sadness, as seen in Chapter 30. The depth of their connection and the details in the writing are heartwarming. When MC's ex betrays him, ML's protectiveness nearly boils over into anger. When MC's health deteriorates due to online harassment, ML goes to great lengths to find him, risking his life in a dramatic scene.
Reading this story truly tugs at the heartstrings. I wish I could express my emotions better, but alas, my language skills are as flawed as MC's cheating ex. Still, I encourage you to read it for yourself, as it's a beautiful and bittersweet tale of love.
First and foremost, I extend heartfelt thanks to the translator for their dedication in bringing this novel to our understanding. Despite its intriguing premise, the book appears to have been crafted by a teenager, incorporating numerous clichés. It possesses potential, yet it falls short due to poor writing and glaring plot inconsistencies.
Upon comparing the translated and machine-translated versions, I believe the issue lies primarily with the author's inability to delve deeper into the story. Here are some notable plot holes:
1. There is no explanation for the protagonist's sudden ability to see ghosts; it comes out of nowhere.
2. Her fame prior to the reincarnation is cited as a reason for her prowess, but it feels forced.
3. The character description of the ML (male lead) as a hotshot entertainment company president, who'd eagerly re-claim the FL (female lead) after she pursued his nephew, lacks logical coherence, even within a fantastical context. Additionally, the ML is portrayed as a skilled secret agent in disguise.
While both the author and translator put in effort, I must advise those seeking quality storytelling to look elsewhere. This novel reads more like a youth-oriented work, and while I respect the positive ratings from others, it didn't meet my expectations. The promising foundation was marred by inadequate writing, and despite my initial interest, I couldn't continue past Chapter 15.