The blurb is a lie. Rio is not the main character, Link is. The favoritism is so blatant and for some odd reason, the author seems confused that we call him out on it. I will say that he has done a fantastic job of making Rio an extra not only in the novel world but also his reincarnated one as well. I would say the author is cooking something extraordinary for Rio, but I no longer trust him. I was astonished he won at the competition, though I side eye him that he only did that so the readers don’t stage a mass protest.Grammar leaves a lot to be desired, the earlier chapters are atrocious and I urge the author to edit those chapters. This is a character driven book so 6/5 for bringing so many characters to life. World building is great and the romance is cute without being full of dramatic misunderstandings. Despite my frustration with Rio always getting the short end of the stick and Link being the real Mc, I do like the novel and can’t wait to see how the story develops. One particular plot I’m waiting on is Kira, I have my suspicions about her so I can’t wait to see if I’m right. If you can get past the grammar, I believe you will find the novel enjoyable. Good job author.
This is amazing i kinda have an idea of whats going on but i also dont but i just cant stop reading
As of ch. 37 the Mc is a wuss, clown and an idiot of highest order. Nothing special about him even with the powerful cheat he has in the form of white lotus which captured the souls of 4000+ magus and the clown has absorbed some of them yet still has the intelligence of a rock.. Tho this statement is a bit unfair to the rock.
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Garbage grammer and spelling. pay wall way to early to really determine if it's worth the money no really world building
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Even though the title is 'the incubus system' I would like if somehow the could also wield light energy. After all he is a nephilim. He should have this advantage , besides it would also allow us insight into the angels world maybe.
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you are a good author, keep up the good work .l'm so excited to know what is going to happen .please finish it quickly l need to know the end of it.
This is an interesting novel. The emotion pours out of the characters, and the descriptions are really poetic. My only concern is with the plot development, where I feel like it takes a while to see where the novel is going. The first chapter is a bit heavy on the information load, but apart from that, good job.
Oh my god...it's gettin' better ang better... Please don't kill me in excitement...??? It is ok to release it bit by bit...just keep us elevated from emotions and happiness... My line of work requires a tonn of patience and perseverance...so this kind of story really helped me release my stress and emotional struggles...oh my god...did i just relieved my stress towards you? Sorry..???..keep it up...good luck